Kahi Nuva: Ace Attorney - An Interactive Adventure

[Paradox]

@Chronicler

@Paradox Please, be patient. The game has to go down the way it goes down. And I can’t keep revising this thing over and over because of last-minute replies.

I’m sorry if I did something wrong, but I have no idea how it’s supposed to end, so I’m not sure if my suggestions would make a revision…

@Chronicler

writing the script for “History of BIONICLE” in pen.

Viper only narrates HoB, someone else (I think Var) writes the script!

EDIT:

@Chronicler

pencil and a piece of ripped paper from his jacket,

Was Eljay wearing a jacket?