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-Jakami, newly appointed Grammar Nazi.
This was an amazing read. Fantasti-coolā¢ work there. I look forward to Episode Two. 
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An update of some sorts:
(It looks terrible, I know. Just deal with it.)
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interestingā¦
I just read through the entire thing. I canāt wait for the next adventure!
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I read the entire thing after the case was over. Turned out better than I expected. Still, some scenes didnāt make it.
One was with Kahi asking āEljayā why he found a time-travelling Muaka so special, and he said it was because it related to his favorite TV show.
We also missed a scene where Slime pressed onto Meso about the āstuff and things.ā I forgot to include that entirely. 
XD
Chronkiwongi?
EDIT:
Also, I think Var would be great to add. He could do the autopsies. Alsoā¦
Judge Venom: Order in theā¦
Var: MAAAAAAAARDI GRAAAAAAAAS
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Lol. Sounds like a great idea. XD
Anyways, hereās a bit of an update:
I have about half of the script done for The Invictus Turnabout. I hope to have more of it done by Saturday if itās possible. Once itās done, Iāll probably make the pictures and other pieces of evidence.
However, when the game starts up again, I wonāt make an absolute. If all goes well, Iād love to start it on Saturday, but thatās likely not the case. Keep your hopes on next weekend.
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Hereās an idea: make it multiple choice. That way people wonāt stray from the intended path.
Take your time m8, I canāt go online Saturday anyway.
But the guessing is the best partā¦
I considered that at first, but then I realized that Ace Attorney doesnāt do that most of the time for a reason. If I made it multiple choice, one of the harder answers would suddenly make sense if I actually GAVE you the choices.
Besides, in the actual games, you need to use your mind to cross examine and present evidence, like I was doing here.
Plus, if you guys stray from the intended path, I actually plan on starting the Penalty System like they have in the games. That way, if you get it wrong, you can think it out again.
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Itās an update. Donāt get all over me and get upset.
Anyways, hereās the update:
(Cronk Modsquad is a versatile character, since I can get a lot of his expressions from the 2015 animations instead of sprites.)
(Your double post picker-upper is ready for duty!)
The script is complete so now Iām developing pictures for characters and stuff in order to make the episode. Hopefully I can start this sooner or later.
Meanwhile you guys could help by getting me pictures of Gali with her golden mask in the animations.
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I read episode 1, and it was quite the interesting read! I look forward to episode 2.
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āInterestingā
Yep. Quite interesting.
This may also give people some interestā¦
(Also please reply because I donāt want to double post when I start the game sometime.)
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George Clooney
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I laughed for a solid 8 minutes.
psst.
ed was my idea.
The coffee mug is a nice touch
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@Hobrenar Actually, the character Iām basing Var off of actually has an obsession with coffee, so I just kept it in his hands.
Episode 2: The Invictus Turnabout
āā¦Youāre such a Zaktan fan youād know that.ā
āYou know what? Iāve had enough of your crap. Zaktan this, Zaktan that. You talk about him more than I do. I hate this. Why did I ever agree to be on this analysis? Itās full of rubbish. You should end your series, Iām leavingā¦ā
āā¦ā
āYou know what. Maybe I will.ā
September 27th, 2015. Detention Center.
Kahi: Alright, Eljay. What did you get yourself caught up into this time?
Eljay: Oh you know, the usual. I take my only day off this year and suddenly Iām arrested for the disappearance of Invictus.
Kahi: Wait, didnāt he leave a year ago?
Eljay: Apparently heās still around. He was last seen at the park I was at. But suddenly, he vanished! For no reason whatsoever! And they blamed it all on me! I donāt understand it!
Kahi: Thatās probably why you called me when I was busy working on On Airā¦
Eljay: You were? I doubt it.
Kahi: Whatever. Anyways, you called me to be your attorney, didnāt you?
Eljay: Yesā¦
Kahi: (First Meso, now Eljay. Who will I be defending next? Takuma or something?)
Eljay: You need to help me, Kahi. They have all this evidence against me. All I was doing was filming my regrettable review for Gold Good Guy. Honest.
Kahi: ~sigh~ Fine. Iāll take the case. Now, where is the crime scene?
Eljay: At the Community Park, in the āGames ānā Suchā section. Youād better head there fast before you run into Moderators trying to figure out the case.
Kahi: Right.
Shall we go to the park? (Gonna need a response guys)
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