well I liked all the chapters so far, I don’t have a favourite right now, the characters are pretty good, the name of the villain is quite hard to read(atleast for me) but this looks promising
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Well now that you mention it I’ll just post how to pronounce he names.
Eherad: Ay-hee-rad
Shiku: She-koo
Plasmu: Plas-moo
Pumua: Poom-ooa
Kaeeno: Kah-ee-no
Koano: Koh-a-no
Zaku: Zah-koo
Bahraku: Bah-ra-koo
Zilosd: Zayy-los (d is silent)
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The organization in this chapter was much better than the first two, but I’d like to see a little more development from the characters. You touched on it, but I’d really like to see more from the Toa in later chapters. Zaku and Zilosd got some nice development here, and I’m glad about that. Good work so far, keep it up!
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Of course, just wanted to show a little bit more of Zilosd since in the last chapter not much of him was shown. Thanks again!
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Thank you so much i really needed that.
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Really good chapter. Zilosd, after a videogame boss entrance, finally meets the Toa and practically mocks them, like it. I like his speech, makes him look like a pretty arrogant villain.
I like that the Toa failed because they are not united and, as Zaku said, can’t even stand each other.
One thing I didn’t particularly enjoy was Zaku “saving the situation”, but I think there’s a reason for this.
Looking forward to read about the “exact event”.
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Deus ex Zakuhina.
I’m Sorry…
but Zakuhina is a really cool sounding name. I think, I just came up with a name of a MOC
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There should be a head shaking face on here
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Glad you enjoyed. Your posts is one of the better ones, actually tells me what someone thought about the chapter hue.
And chapter 4 might be released around the week, as for your price do you want it public or just for you?
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I’ve been following this story for some time, and I have some questions/comments.
Could you post pictures of the Okoto… Toa? Okotoa?
It’s hard to get invested in them if I don’t know what any of them look like.
Secondly, I think it would be a cool idea to have a MOC competition for the Bahraku. Are they like a swarm with several different breeds, or are they all different? (and no, I’m not just saying this to enter my Otoko-guy, I have some cool ideas for villains).
Anyway that’s pretty much It. I love the story and I’m looking forward to future updates.
P.S. I just remembered, The villains should have some other name theme (i.e. Latin, Spanish, Chinese) and not Maori.
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I actually worked on the Nuguk fight and btw I mentioned they are named Toa-Kaly, and now that you mention it I feel like drawing, DETERMINATION WOOOO. I’ll post the pic later, as for the Bahraku…sure!
#CONTEEEEEST
If you want your Bahraku to appear on the chapter painting you must:
1.) build three different classes: small one, medium, big (as tall as UTH tops)
2.) must be like animalistic and yet humanoid, Lava beast like if you will.
2.) must use black with an accent color
4.) inb4 you say I wrote 2 instead of 3. Anyway the contest ends in two days.
Good luck!
-GGGGGG
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what the hell is a bahraku?
ohh like bad rahi(no?), clevah
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Teh badgaiz.
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Great! But as for the pictures, I meant the pictures people took of their MOCs. Drawings are always great though! 
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why bahraku have to be black… oh wait I actually made a moc two days ago black&gold(and a little blue, nothing photoshop can fix), does that count
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Since the Bahraku are not likely to have a full chapter dedicated to them I’ll just say this: the witch (yet to be named, perhaps BlueCel is fitting huehue, more developement on her later) spawns these creatures with a material know as aura-dermis. More info on this material will surely appear later on.
@Asriel it counts, even ms paint drawings count as long as they look decent.
I kinda want to try building a Bahraku, although I have no assurances that it’ll be good.
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my moc is a mix of an elephant-feline-ape he is… quite big but not bigger than UtH (atleast I dont think so)
tomorrow just before going to college I have a free hour, Ill take a pic,
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#BE SURE TO PM, DON’t POST HERE.
Caps are life hue
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Well Koano is just a Inika build With the Mask of stealth and a breathing apparatus
I will be reworking her for a few reasons
- Her lore is outdate
- needs a new body and Weapons
- Is just bland
But since she is also my only female Ko Toa so I put it up for the comic as a unique twist to the team.
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