Matau Hordika Revamp

TheRed1s · July 4, 2016, 5:40pm

Hey guys, got another MOC for ya

Criticism is always welcome.

Ninja · July 4, 2016, 5:41pm

I wanted to quote Web of Shadows but the quote escaped me.
This is pretty cool though.

Mechmaster · July 4, 2016, 5:41pm

i really like it but i feel like he lacks the “mutated beast” appearance. a great moc but just not hordika enough if you get what im trying to say

Sammythekat · July 4, 2016, 5:46pm

Looks good, but he’s missing the massive, semi-mutated arm, y’know?

Oniwah · July 4, 2016, 5:47pm

It’s not a very movie accurate Matau, but as a MOC, this looks really good. The only thing that sorta bugs me is the lack of silver in the legs, but other than that, you did a really nice job.

BlueCel · July 4, 2016, 5:48pm

Everything looks great here!
But as Oniwah said the lack of silver in the legs looks odd. Also you might want to fix the title “ravamp”

Hutere · July 4, 2016, 5:49pm

This looks good!

Sammythekat · July 4, 2016, 5:49pm

Edited Title for Spelling- Not_DagFire

TheRed1s · July 4, 2016, 5:52pm

Thanks guys, I’ll probably update it sometime this week

Sammythekat · July 4, 2016, 5:52pm

Yea, besides those things, the MOC looks just fine!

Well, that, and the open balljoints on the thighs

Mechmaster · July 4, 2016, 5:54pm

i didnt notice those on first glance and now im getting ptsd, worse than blue pins

Mistah_Grammaticul · July 4, 2016, 5:56pm

It’s sleek, skinny, and oddly froglike (don’t ask me how, although I think it’s the hands). As usual, good job!

Scorpion_Strike · July 4, 2016, 5:58pm

On a normal humanoid MOC, I’d say the proportions are a bit off, but the tall, lanky appearance actually works really well here to evoke that ‘mutant’ vibe. The only change I’d make would be to replace the dark green metru feet on the legs with silver ones; other than that I think it’s awesome.

Sammythekat · July 4, 2016, 5:59pm

Neither did I, seeing as they actually fit the shaping of the thigh!

TheRed1s · July 4, 2016, 6:01pm

They figured it out…

Kopeke · July 4, 2016, 7:19pm

Looks pretty good though, I might make his head a little more hunched and closer to his chest, to give him a bit more of a beast feel. He feels a little too upright to be beasty.

Dragon_Ben · July 4, 2016, 7:39pm

That looks really good man. I love the way you made the shoulders and the torso.

Moa · July 5, 2016, 1:02am

I think the open balljoints on the legs are fine. I know it’s not an excuse for a “bad moc” (which this isn’t) but he’s not supposed to look right. He’s mutated.

Pakari · July 5, 2016, 1:48am

He looks like…

SOME KINDA MONSTER!!

Haha, he looks great! As lots of people already said, he needs the asymmetry. The build is there, but he needs to look like, well…a monster!

Keep up the good work!

TheRed1s · July 5, 2016, 1:58am

@Kopeke_Nuva @Dragon_Ben @moa @PakariNation99

Thanks guys