Please choose your words more carefully. There are ways to communicate your criticisms on a MOC without using patronizing language. No one here is perfect at the craft, and not everyone can work at the same speed. There is merit to what you have to say, but there are much better ways to go about saying it.
As for the MOC, I’d say it looks fine, but there are some inconsistent aesthetics that, if reworked, could make the MOC look much better. The proportions are good, and the torso build is pretty well done. The legs could be better, perhaps by incorporating more technic and less ccbs? You’d have many more options as well as more consistency with the look of the torso. The color scheme is a bit inconsistent, but I see what you’re going for. I would drop all the different shades of red and blue and focus on maybe just three of those, say for example, mata red, dark azure, and dark trans-blue.
The best part about evolution is that it never stops. If you should make any adjustments to this MOC, I look forward to seeing it- hopefully sooner than four years!