My own bionicle reboot (mobr) for short: prologue

This “reboot” imad was built with the idea that I had to start fresh with the story, not connect it to the other bionicle timelines. I did take inspiration for my story from ttv’s brickonicle, like lewa’s gender.
Soo… lets get on with the show!

Prologue:

Deep in the research tower in the capital city:

Teridax: Matoran! Get me Artaka! I have finally finished my greatest project ever!
Matoran: The king… but why…?

Teridax: I already told you! Now go get him!!!
Matoran: Y.y.yessss sir.
Teridax: Now it is only a matter of time…

Matoran: Makuta Teridax would like to see you my king.
Artaka: But why?
Matoran: He said that he had finished his greatest project ever…
Artaka: Enough said. I will go see him.

Clank!


Artaka: Follow me.

Matoran: Ye.Yes.

Artaka: I’m here Teri… A mask?!
Teridax:Yes… A mask that I have created!
Artaka: But wh…
Teridax: You know how I want to experience the power of all the elements?
Artaka: Yes I do.
Well there is only one element left…
Artaka: Wait! Teri don’t!!!


Teridax: Shad… d d d d d. Rrrrrr… Arrr Awwwwwrrr!!!
Artaka: Its too late!!


Makuta: Shadow!!!

Makuta: Mwahahahahaaaa!!!

Artaka: ugghhh…

Makuta: Raawwwww!!

Makuta: Mwahahaha!

2 years later…

Matoran: King, Makuta Teridax has been located…
Artaka: is Epsilon with him?
Matoran: Yes.
Artaka: Then for all of Artaka Nui… Let’s end this War!! I will not let him escape again!

Makuta Warrior: ullllllgh
Artaka: Now for Epsilon… then Makuta…

Makuta Epsilon: Fight me Artaka! Your toa were no match for me! You also being a toa will most certainly help me! As queen of the Makuta! I will defeat you!
Artaka: Then So Be It…

Both of them: Arrrrrrr!!!



Epsilon: Mwehehehehuu?


Epsilon: ughhhhhhhhh…
Bu but… ho…o…w…
Artaka: I won. You lost. That’s all.
Now time to fight Makuta Teridax himself.
Epsilon: Well I hope you fall!! My brother will never give up!
Artaka: And neither will I.

Makuta: And so you made it…
Artaka: Brother! Listen to me!!!
Your mask had made you evil! You must fight it
Makuta Teridax: I told you never call me brother again! And the mask doesn’t make me evil! It shows me my true!!! Potential!!

Artaka: Then let us begin!

Awrrrrwaaaaaa!!!



Makuta: This mask gives me control over shadow!
It makes me powerful!
It is perfect!
I am perfect!
Artaka: No one is perfect! No…

Artaka: One!

Artaka: Isssss!!!


Makuta Teridax: Bwawwwwwww!!!


Artaka: Goodbye my Kingdom… my people…

Bwoooooooommmmmmmkshhhhhhhhshhhhshshhshhhhh…

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Snort’ PFFFFFT! BWAHAAHHAA! XD
I’m sorry! For some reason that one typo keeps really getting to me! (Don’t fix it!)

Love the idea though, could be interesting.

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I think you should prolonge it

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Thanks!
What did you think of the story so far?

So… Let me understand… Artaka is in war with his brother, Teridax, that changed his name into Makuta. Pretty basic, but cool. In this story we will see your moc characters, like Ara or the Dark Hunters?

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No, you will probably not see my other moc characters in this story. But you will see the original toa and turaga (in name). Their personalities will be different.

Also; Teridax isn’t actually Artaka’s brother. They grew so close that they were like brothers.

Makuta/Makuta Teridax is the biological brother of Makuta Epsilon, the Queen of the Makuta species.
It’s a bit confusing, buuuuut so was g1’s storyline at times.

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As opposed to LEGO’s Brickonicle?

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I think I would like to see some of your mocs.

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All of the characters are Mocs though…

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Quite epic mocs! I enjoyed reading the story this morning.

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Thanks!
Welp more parts of the story are coming up… soon.

Orrrr right now!

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