Po-Wahi Stopping Point (TTVC 2 Brickoncle)

[Spiderus_Prime]

PO-WAHI STOPPTING POINT
Set# 31601
Pieces: 88 114
Age: 6-16
Price: $14.99

Well I made this that is based on that scene in MNOG where Takua first meets Hafu, since I got very little tan pieces, so I used dark tan and reddish-brown as tempting stand ins.

Front

Life Side

Back

Right Side

Minifigures: Av-Matoran Chronicler Takua and Po-Matoran Stone Craver Hafu w/ a Kofu-jaga

No Action Features in the Pathway itself, it only made as a small box or a polybag set.
EDIT: Here is very quick update with a Brick-Built Kofu-Jaga and some Mountains.

Official TTV MOC Contest #2: Brickonicle

I like where this is going, but I have a few questions before I enter: You said this will be based on canon characters only. Does that mean we could make our own interpretation of the characters -say I wanted to make Vezon a happy gleeful toa, for example. Could we have the “story” set in other Universes, say The Kingdom alternate dimension? I have a topic revolving around my own version of system Generation 3, which you can find here. Could I use some of these character models? I have my own Matoran and, essentially, Turaga, on that same topic as well. Could I introduce those characters in my sets? Of course I’ll have Tahu and the like as well. Lastly, if we’re working with LDD, would you prefer that the images be rendered with a particular program? And if so, which one would …

[ReeseEH]

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Is it meant to be a mask carving? If so I can’t quite make out a likeness.

[RayFisch]

I think Eljay said you can’t have fewer than 100 pieces in the set, not entirely sure on that though

[BlueCel]

It’s nice looking but the lack of any functions (like explosions or something) detracts from it

[Rockho]

@Spiderus_Prime

a Kofu-jaga

You should’ve made it brick-built so that it doesn’t seem like a generic scorpion

[JonBlueFire]

It’s an okay set, in my opinion.
It definitely pertains to the story, but it’s not a very dynamic scene in general.
The selection of characters in nice, but as @Rockho said the enemy isn’t very threatening. I definitely think that you should expand upon the ‘concept in a box’ idea more, as right now it’s pretty much a rock with figures.
It’s not a bad set; it’s just got a bit of untaped potential. Fix these issues, and it should be a lot better! I wish you good luck in the contest!

[Spiderus_Prime]

Thanks for the feedback, as for the low-piece count, I mighty miscounting, for the Kofu-Jaga, I might replaced the stander LEGO Scorpion with a brick built one.

EDIT: Well both problems are taking care from with a brick-built Kofu-Jaga and adding some mountains.