These two are the good and bad of some fanfic of mine that Star Elemental created them both first, since Star couldn’t really do much until later in the future when he gains a physical body and weapons of his own.
Star Elemental
Ehh, the upper torso is great, but everything else is lackluster.
They all have some unfinish “feature” and the crotch stick out much.
They do look a little unfinished in the midsection.
Basically what everyone else said about the waist.
I agree with everyone else in that the waists look a little unfinished.
