Synettra - The Dark Rose

Synettra is my first female MOC and is a completely new character in my Bionicle universe. I am very happy with the way this MOC came out and I hope you are too.











Tell me what you think…

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Everything looks good, though the stomach looks a little too thin.

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The stomach is too thin and I’m not exactly fond of the chest and heels. Other than that it looks pretty good.

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yeah… no.

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those proportions
blarg
I am fine with people using “boob s” on their female mocs
but
waaaaaay too oversized xD

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kill this… thing.

this is not how you make a female moc, this looks like a dA vortixx.

put your parts and mind to better use than this.

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I dunno about you but I really like this moc

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That makes one @Risebell , excluding me…

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Rise, buddy, no…

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um… the back is a little too bare. Makes it look a little unfinished IMO.

That nuva butt tho

same man, same.

NO
NONONONONO–

This looks just like a generic G1 FeMoC, except remade into CCBS. That said, the color scheme is consistent, ant that polearm looks nice.

Also, hooves on a wolf-headed chararcter?

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I quite like this as well.

Cons:

  • Stomach and “boob’s” aren’t very proportional to each other.
  • Might wanna work on the lower legs a little, they look a little too plain.
  • IS THAT A CHAIN LOIN CLOTH?!!

This MOC is wayyyyyy too over-sexualized. I’m alright with making MOCs feminine, but this is too much. You need to really work on that.

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This MOC is awesome! She silver is very sleek and the name is super SHWEET but um… The reason true stomach looks to small is cause of the… nuva armour that represents… breasts… Yah I give it a 9/10

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Vortixx + SW boobz + nuva butt + way too feminine appearance = this.
I mean, I don’t mean to be harsh, but
you really need to scrap this lady.

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Curves :tram:

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KILL IT WITH FIRE!

If it could be converted to a more functional form, I’d be fine

but this

The CCBS b000bs are bizarre

that nuva shoulder on the but is out of place

the proportions are… decent, but odd

Change this to some functional moc where the ‘features’ are optional

otherwise I don’t think I can like this

People say scrap it.

Don’t.

Just fix it.

Redesign the torso and you should be good.

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