Name: Jormuntrax Assigned region: None Kanohi: Mask of Psychometry Status: Dead Weapons: Elbow-Blades
Jormuntrax was creating Rahi at the beginning, just like every other Makuta. When the Brotherhood went to war with the League of six Kingdoms, he worked as a spy, infiltrating fortresses of the Barraki and gathering information about their individual plans, of which Takadox would have no knowledge.
When Teridax declared the Plan, Jormuntrax joined him. Teridax then elevated him to the head of the intelligence gathering system of the Brotherhood - a job that mostly involved dealing with various mercenaries, spies and such, while travelling the Matoran Universe. He also dealt a lot with the Dark Hunters.
When the Shadowed One found out that Teridax had killed Nidhiki and Krekka in Metru Nui and declared war on the Brotherhood, Jormuntrax became an easy target, because many Dark Hunters worked for him - they joined forces and he was overwhelmed and killed.
@TheMoltenKing Most of that is armour on the head, I didn’t talk about that. But yeah, It’s kinda awkward especially around the neck area. I’ll probably improve him when I’ll have more ideas for him.
Looks nice, I really like the custom head. The front of his torso could use some more white in my opinion, but otherwise he has a good colour scheme. I just wonder what that orange tank thingie is meant to be - not that it looks bad, I just would like to know.
The story however …
You probably meant that he took Teridax’ side when the Makuta had to choose between Teridax and Miserix?
This unfortunately doesn’t work at all.
Canon story rule - he has to die before the events in Karda Nui
( 2) Takanuva as a Toa would never kill an enemy willingly)
So you’ll have to change the Main Universe story to get Jormuntrax accepted.
Sure I can think up some kind of story for him. Let’s see … What about something like this:
Jormuntrax was creating Rahi at the beginning, just like every other Makuta. When the Brotherhood went to war with the League of six Kingdoms, he worked as a spy, infiltrating fortresses of the Barraki and gathering information about their individual plans, of which Takadox would have no knowledge.
When Teridax declared the Plan, Jormuntrax joined him. Teridax then elevated him to the head of the intelligence gathering system of the Brotherhood - a job that mostly involved dealing with various mercenaries, spies and such, while travelling the Matoran Universe. He also dealt a lot with the Dark Hunters.
When the Shadowed One found out that Teridax had killed Nidhiki and Krekka in Metru Nui and declared war on the Brotherhood, Jormuntrax became an easy target, because many Dark Hunters worked for him - they joined forces and he was overwhelmed and killed.
Of course this can be formulated better, but what do you think? Does it fit your idea of his character?
