He’s excruciatingly fancy.
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The headress took a significant bit of work to stabilize, but eventualy I pulled it together. Any comments or questions?
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Other than the headdress, this looks like it was thrown together, but I can see potential in this.
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I like that you’ve gone for a creative build with this. However the body seems huge compared to the legs and the arms though the build is interesting. I can see what you were going for with the head but I think it doesn’t work too well. Color scheme is actually fine until we get to the legs. All in all I see a lot of good ideas, but many of them could be used better.
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The build is creative, but it needs a good deal of streamlining.
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His legs are short and thin while the arms are long and bulky. The colours don’t match. The Ekimu shoulder armour hanging of his body look tacked on and the upside down mask of creation sticks out like a sore thumb. All in all, I think this Moc could have been a whole lot better. I do like the head though!
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The ekimu butt flap
I will never unsee
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This might be a good time to stop posting MOCs here…
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the head seems to big, also id recommend for you to use remove some colors
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Don’t stop posting MoCs! Just take the criticism and use it to improve!
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I’m not making a hard and fast decision right now; however, I’ve posted six or seven MOCs here and they all end up getting torn to pieces-no pun intended.
It’s not the fault of you guys; maybe I should just focus more on my writing, TBH.
Even if you think your mocs are terrible, that doesn’t mean not to post things. You won’t improve as rapidly if you stop posting mocs. Critique is going to occur. Use as a chance to improve.
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I agree with @Omega_Tahu. Critiques help you to improve. My entry for the rebrick contest wouldn’t be what it is now if I didn’t post it on the message boards for critiques. Don’t give up hope!
The build is definitely creative- something I haven’t really seen before. But like many others, I agree with @Omega_Tahu
the head seems to long and im not to fond of the lower leg but other than that pretty good
Yeah, you can’t ignore that. That’s true.
I might keep posting them; for the time being, I’m still really on the fence. Thanks for the feedback, guys.
Hahaha, thanks man, I appreciate it; don’t worry, I have other things that I’m hopeful about. 
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