I’d consider that to be a great improvement.
The thighs and shoulders seem a little barren though
looks pretty good
I think the proportions are good, and she looks much less cluttered as well
Also, I for one don’t mind the barren thighs and shoulders
Yeah, this is indubitably an improvement. I think the taller torso looks better proportionally.
I feel like there just needs to be a little space between the shoulder and torso or mobility may be limited
Yeah great update. The new torso pretty much fixes the proportions, good job. The height is nice, I like characters with different heights makes them feel a bit more real.
The proportions in this first image are great, also, what’s that on her arms? Sort of looks like a white piece glitching within the pin hole or something.
I think that’s the minifig roller skate piece
On the front is a minifigure roller skate:
On the back, and wrapping around the side, is a 1x1/1x1 inverted bracket:
I just added them to fill out the upper arm. I also updated it not long after making that post, anyways:
I’m not sure which one I prefer; I like the overall shaping of the new design, but I also prefer the “thin-ness” of the old version.
I prefer the new one; the old one looked incomplete, like it was missing shoulder armour.
Looks way better, may i see her from feet to head with that added? She’s definitely getting my vote.
I like the metal blue
Me too
Thanks Sir!
Spear Update:
There’s nothing too crazy here, design-wise; as soon as I read “spear”, I envisioned a long, thin weapon (as opposed to the bulkier heads of the Hagah spears), and I knew 16L axles came in white.
I’m just not sure which tip I like more. The smaller one is closer to my vision of “thin”, but it’s maybe too small.
(Also, the pose in those images make it clear that I need to add internal/external rotation to at least one point in her upper arm; there’s really bad clipping at both shoulders)
It’s a pike, rather than a spear. I like it. Although it might be slightly too thin for my tastes. And I would definitely not use the tiny spike.
I found a third option that’s my favourite so far:
This has the size of the Mahritoran blade and the rotational symmetry of the smaller tip (more or less). The only issue is that it looks not-great from other angles.
Maybe you could connect two of those blade pieces on an axle connector then add that to the spear…
Know what I mean?