this is a joke, right?
Sorry but the whole thing is a bit of a mess. I can’t really tell what it is but it just doesn’t look good. It may be big and tall but that doesn’t make up for it looking good. Maybe try starting with smaller scale MOCs and then once you get good at making those start making bigger ones like this.
I have to agree with them. This is very gappy, and the color scheme is - no offense - horrible. Try and narrow down the colors a bit, fill in those gaps with details, and try to clean up the messiness.
What am I looking at.
Seriously, what am I looking at. 
If this is meant as a satire of the Toa Kaita builds then I guess well done, if not then follow @OraNui’s advice.
It has certain charm to it?
I guess??
Really, really messy.
Oh my.
@toa_of_red_pins , is that you?
Your names even sound similar.
This is so bad I don’t even know where to start.
The color-scheme is atrocious, it looks like you took every piece you had, slapped them together, and made this…thing. Try deciding what colors you want to use BEFORE making the MOC, it will help greatly when MOCing.
Those hands look like garbage, I can’t even make out the fingers.
That head is also awful. Where are the eyes?
0/10 MOC, there are probably more complaints I can think of too, I might have to come back too this. I honestly hope this is a joke.
so, unsalvageable?
I remember doing stuff like this when I was younger. I remember thinking how cool a monolithic MOC can seem. Sometimes it’s better to just use a couple similar colors, then you get something nice.
Can we all take into account that this might be a younger kid? I don’t mean to be that guy, but everyone’s been a little harsh… And the likelihood this is a troll is slim. I mean, this is a subfandom of Lego, a children’s toy company after all.
I do see what you mean. Sorry if we’re being harsh @ToaOfBohrokThings, but we’re just giving out some criticism that will help you get better at mocing.
Thank you very much @squeaverking and @Guywithbricks279. Also, I am probably not as old as you or anyone who replied to my post. Thanks for the feedback. Also just so everyone knows, Toa Kaianas is not a joke.
Just keep in mind you have to be 13 to join the site.