By the way, The reason I said Official v1 is because they had some past versions that … were pretty disgraceful. If I had posted Windfall in black and silver… Nuh-uh.
The Girl… Metru boobs are funny, the arms, specifically the bohrok shield pieces, feel out of place. The Golden painted pieces are alright. Hair doesn’t seem all that necessary…
I’m fairly certain I saw “Pearl” before so I’ll just talk about your selfMOC.
…in comparison to the MOC below it, it falls short of what you can do. Too many textures and different types of pieces floating around. It reminds me of some of the worst MOCs that I’ve done recently. I’d suggest redoing the armor so that it uses the same “groupings” of pieces, as the Metru-era pieces on “Pearl” that all come from Metru-build Toa and are thus made to work together. If possible, mixing in some CCBS in Windfall could improve his look.