BIONICLE: Avokan Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Foreword

I’ve been a fan of BIONICLE since 2008. As I got older, I started learning more about the lore and found myself enthralled. As recently as 2019, I’ve been planning on making my own continuation of BIONICLE G1. I have nothing to gain from this and have no other reason to do so beyond my love for the series. If people are interested, that’s great. If people aren’t interested, that’s fine, too. One of my intentions for this story is to reintroduce BIONICLE G1 to older fans and introduce it to a newer generation who wouldn’t have been exposed to it otherwise. If my efforts are successful, so be it. If my efforts fall short, so be it also. I have nothing to gain from this and have no other reason to do so beyond my love for the series. For the convenience of all readers, links to certain things will be provided in the story for context as this is essentially a web novel.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Prologue

Approximately one year after the Restoration of Spherus Magna, many things have changed. Among them are these: Matoran Universe inhabitants that survived Teridax’s reign migrated to Spherus Magna and began integrating their society into that of the natives, cities were built, the Red Star not only had its return function fixed, but, modified so that Matoran Universe inhabitants can still be revived there without their home universe (on the condition that they died in ways that left a body and their minds were still intact, of course), and Teridax from the Melding Alternate Universe and Miserix (the only surviving Makuta in the prime universe) have been making Rahi to aid society. With all the changes that happened, one Toa finds himself lacking purpose in life. This is where the story where that all changes begins.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 1: Seeing the Light

Villa Magna. A thriving metropolis inhabited by a large number of species. The mostly organic Agori, Glatorian, and Skrall and the mostly mechanical Matoran Universe emigrants. The societies have slowly started integrating since the planet Spherus Magna was made whole again. However, there were still lingering prejudices among the populace that were kept largely under control to prevent another war. While most of the citizens went about their day, one lone figure stood atop a building, looking out to the horizon. He stood approximately 7.2’ tall, wore armor of white and gold. On his face was a golden mask that once had a smooth, metallic sheen, but, now bore nicks and scratches from several battles. Once, he answered to the name of Takua, the first Matoran ever created. Now, he had a new identity as Takanuva, the Toa of Light. As he looked out to the horizon, he drank the last of his Energy Fruit smoothie. Had you asked an Agori or Glatorian, they would’ve told you it was a sweet and delectable beverage. Takanuva, however, tasted absolutely nothing. Since he and other members of his species, that being the Matoran, Toa, and Turaga, preferred to eat by absorbing energy from food that bears it (such as fruits, berries, and meat from Rahi or the creatures native to Spherus Magna) through their hands, they had no real need for a sense of taste. While they had the ability to eat with their mouths, they generally refrained from it as they view this act as repulsive. However, this opinion did not extend to the act of drinking. Matoran are 85% mechanical. Machines with moving parts can potentially overheat from too much use. A good way to prevent that is a coolant (a drink). Their mouths are the only really effective way to get the coolant into their bodies. They mainly drank water or liquid protodermis. So, it would hydrate their organic tissue while simultaneously cooling and lubricating their mechanical parts. The water used to cool the mechanical parts would then evaporate from the heat and be expelled through their mouths as they breathed. After Spherus Magna natives introduced the concept of smoothies to the Matoran Universe emigrants, they subsequently invented a way for the emigrants to eat with their mouths without it actually feeling that way. Energy Fruit smoothies were particularly popular because the fruits used to make them had energy restoring properties for Matoran Universe emigrants and Spherus Magna natives alike.

I don’t see the point of it, thought Takanuva. I can’t taste anything. Though, I’ll admit, it’s less repulsive than eating solid food with my mouth.

After finishing his drink, Takanuva placed his empty cup in the trash can nearby. Takanuva then let out a half-bored, half-frustrated sigh. “It’s been the same thing for the past year,” he said to no one in particular. “I do odd jobs between the various cities, get paid, and drink a smoothie. I guess I can’t complain too much since I’m helping those in need, but, with these powers I’ve gained since becoming a Toa, I can’t help but feel I’m wasting my potential. There was a time I thought I was destined to defeat the Makuta, but, it turns out he let me win as part of a bigger plan. Now, after all this time, I don’t know where my destiny lies. There’s occasional crimes these days, but, there’s designated groups to deal with them. Even then, ever since I became a Toa, friends I had as a Matoran see me as some kind of paragon of virtue, but, they don’t see me as a being who struggles with problems like they do.”

Takanuva’s silence was interrupted by the sound of footsteps and a familiar voice. “I thought I’d find you here.”

Takanuva turned around to see a familiar figure in golden and red armor. “Toa Tahu?” he asked.

“Come with me,” the Toa of Fire said. “We have things to discuss with the other Toa Nuva.” Tahu placed his hand on Takanuva’s shoulder and used the Kraata Power of Teleportation absorbed by the Golden Armor to teleport the two of them to another location. They ended up in what looked like a great temple. Takanuva saw other figures present: Gali, Lewa, Kopaka, Pohatu, and Onua. In the center of the room was the dormant Kanohi Ignika. But, what Takanuva found strange was that all of the Toa were no longer Toa Nuva.

“Why are all of you here?” Takanuva asked. “Why are you no longer Toa Nuva?”

“Toa Nuva are unable to become Turaga,” Pohatu explained. “Our destiny was to awaken the Great Spirit and, for better or worse, we succeeded in doing so.”

“Once a Toa fulfills their destiny, they can become Turaga upon sacrificing their Toa Power,” Onua continued. “Now is our time.”

Tahu placed a hand on one stone, which he infused with his Toa Power. This caused him to become a Turaga. The other Toa Mata followed suit with Onua imbuing two stones with Toa Power. After they had all become Turaga, they were a bit confused with Onua putting his power into two stones.

“Any reason you used two stones, Onua?” Pohatu asked.

“Just in case,” the newly transformed Onua said. “Perhaps the next generation will have a team of more than six members. After all, the first Toa Team the Matoran knew about, the Toa Cordak, had 8 members.”

“That is true,” Kopaka conceded.

“Come to think of it,” Gali added. “The Toa Mangai consisted of 11 Toa. Two of which were Toa of Water and four of which were Toa of Ice. Additionally, their leader, Lhikan, previously led an army of 300 Toa. There’s not nearly enough elemental variety for there to be that many Toa with different elements.”

“A new generation of Toa?” Takanuva said. “But, why now? Most threats from our old universe have been vanquished.”

“The Ignika has given us a vision,” Gali explained. “It foretold the coming of a Toa of Shadow who seeks to continue Makuta Teridax’s evil plans. You are to lead a new team of Toa to combat this evil.”

“But, how will I know if I’m picking the right Matoran?” Takanuva asked.

“Well, you have experience leading a handful of them,” Tahu said before handing Takanuva his Toa Stone. “Take mine to Kapura in the Fire Village.”

Gali gave Takanuva hers. “And give mine to Macku.”

Pohatu did the same. “Mine to Hafu.”

Kopaka followed suit. “Mine to Kopeke.”

Lewa. “Mine to Tamaru.”

And finally, Onua. “And give one of mine to Taipu and the other to Onepu.”

Takanuva took the Toa Stones. “I understand, Turaga.” As he set out, he thought to himself, Well, I guess I asked for something worthwhile to do with my life. I guess this is what I get for not being careful what I wished for.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 2: Slow Burn

Vulco Magna. The volcanic region housing Ta-Villa, a village built in the shadow of an active volcano. After the reformation of Spherus Magna, it had become home to Agori and Glatorian of the Fire Tribe as well as the Ta-Matoran, Su-Matoran, and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Fire and Plasma. Beings from other tribes and elements were welcome, but, unlike those of the Fire Tribe or Fire/Plasma elements, they didn’t commonly take permanent residence. This blazing village was the home of Lava Farmers and Mask Makers. One Ta-Matoran was slowly pacing outside the village. From his mask to his feet, he was clad in red armor. His name was Kapura. On the island of Mata Nui, he once had the inexplicable ability to travel great distances by walking slowly. Ever since the migration to Spherus Magna, he found himself unable to do so no matter how much he practiced. While frustrated with this development, he knew complaining wouldn’t do any good. Instead, he now used his slow pacing as a means of clearing his head after a stressful day. His slow pace earned him the nickname, Slow Burn. During these pacing sessions, he would be supervised by a female Fire Tribe Agori named Fernejin. Her armor was dark red with bits of yellow while her eyes were bright blue.

“Okay, Slow Burn,” Fernejin said. “Time to head back.”

“Thank you for your patience, Fernejin,” Kapura said. He was about to follow Fernejin to her vehicle when Takanuva, riding on a rebuilt Ussanui, arrived. “Toa Takanuva?”

“Delivery from Tahu,” Takanuva said, handing the packaged Toa Stone Tahu gave him. Then, he took off on his Ussanui to the next village.

“Okay…” Fernejin commented. “What was that about?”

“I have a feeling I’ll find out,” Kapura said.

When he returned to his home in Ta-Villa, Kapura opened the package and found a strange stone resembling the traditionally cut lightstone. However, what made it seem different was the fact that it was glowing red.

“Most unusual,” the Ta-Matoran observed before noticing the packaging, which was a map. Kapura carefully studied the map to see where it led.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 3: Roaming Waves

Aqua Magna. Once an ocean moon surrounding the planet Bara Magna and now the entire ocean of Spherus Magna. Its waters lapped the shores of the coastal village of Ga-Villa, which was home to many sailors, fishers, divers, and many others whose occupations revolved around the sea. Among them were the Agori and Glatorian of the Water Tribe and Ga-Matoran, Ba-Matoran, and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Water and Gravity. Why did beings of the Gravity element live there? The answer is simple. They had a greater resistance to high pressures than any other being. This served them well as divers, since it would allow them to go deeper in the water than most while only needing an air supply. On this particular day, three Ga-Matoran were at the edge of one of the village’s many piers. They were named Nixie, Macku, and Kotu. They were preparing to transport the fishers’ catches of the day when they heard a familiar voice.

“Uh, a little help?” the voice called out. The Ga-Matoran turned to see a familiar Water Tribe Agori who had somehow managed to wind up dangling from the hook of a crane by a rope around his ankle.

“Berix is stuck again,” Nixie observed.

“At least he didn’t break anything this time,” Kotu said, trying to be positive.

“I’ll go get Kiina,” Macku said. But, she didn’t get far as Kiina was already a stone’s throw away.

“Let me guess,” the Glatorian said. “Berix got stuck again?”

“Yes,” Macku said.

Kiina looked at Berix’s situation in both confusion and amusement. “Should I even bother asking how you got stuck like that?”

“No,” Berix said, clearly embarrassed.

“Well, hold still,” Kiina said before jumping up and concentrating a thin stream of water through her Vapor Trident to cut the rope tied to Berix’ ankle. The Ga-Matoran quickly caught him before he landed on the dock. “Honestly, Berix,” Kiina said. “This is like the third time you’ve gotten yourself stuck this week alone.”

“I know,” Berix said. “Lately, things always seem to go wrong for me. It’s times like this I start to miss people hating me. At least then, I didn’t have to worry about embarrassing myself.”

Before anyone could say anything, a shadow flew overhead. When they all followed the way it went, they saw Takanuva getting off his Ussanui after landing it on the pier.

“Toa Takanuva?” the Ga-Matoran said in awe.

“Delivery from Gali,” Takanuva said while handing Macku the packaged Toa Stone Gali gave him. Then, he took off on his Ussanui to the next village.

Macku opened the package to see the stone and that it was wrapped in a map. “A map?” she inquired.

“You can go ahead and follow it, Macku,” Kiina said. “I’ll cover for you.”

“Uh, can I go with her?” Berix asked. “I don’t want to get in the way.”

“Yeah, sure, go ahead,” Kiina replied.

With that, Macku and Berix began following the map.

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Very nice. I like the reasoning behind the Ba-Matoran living near the sea

I figured it’d work with their resistance to high pressures since the deeper under water you go, the more pressure there is on your body.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 4: Artisan

Bara Magna. Once the largest surviving remnant of Spherus Magna and now a smaller region of desert housing Po-Villa, which was home to many carvers, brick-layers, carpenters, hewers, Mahi herders, and stonemasons. Among them were Agori and Glatorian of the Sand Tribe and Po-Matoran and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Stone. On that particular day, a Po-Matoran named Hafu was hard at work carving a statue he was commissioned to make for Villa Magna.

“One more chip and it is ready to go,” Hafu said as he admired his work. He was so invested in it that he didn’t notice Takanuva land near him on the Ussanui. It might have remained that way had he not spotted the Toa of Light’s shadow blocking his view. He turned around and looked up. “Ah, Toa Takanuva. Have you come to see the progress of another Hafu original?”

“No such luck,” Takanuva said before delivering the packaged Toa Stone Pohatu gave him. “Delivery from Pohatu.”

“What am I supposed to do with this?” Hafu asked.

“Hold onto it,” Takanuva said before he got on the Ussanui and took off.

Hafu looked at the package. “If a Toa delivers something, it must be important,” he reasoned before shrugging. “I am sure it can wait until I am done.”

So, Hafu finished up his work and opened up the package, finding a rather unusual stone and the map inside the wrapping.

“What is this?” he asked nobody in particular.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 5: Ice Carver

The White Quartz Mountains. A snow-covered region of mountains on the northwest of Spherus Magna. At its summit was the village of Ko-Villa, which was home to many messengers, acolytes, adepts, architects, icesmiths, ice carvers, scribes, and trappers. Among them were Agori and Glatorian of the Ice Tribe and Ko-Matoran and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Ice. Beings from other tribes and elements were welcome, but, unlike those of the Ice Tribe or Ice elements, they didn’t commonly take permanent residence. On this particular day, a Ko-Matoran named Kopeke was carefully recording the important events of the day with the Chronicler’s Staff. He had learned to use paper, though, he saved that for taking notes so he could remember what to carve into the stone walls of history later.

Kopeke was different from most Ko-Matoran as while they were antisocial, he was simply shy. Back on the island of Mata Nui, he was regarded as aloof due to his silent nature. After becoming Chronicler, he started to become more vocal so he could gain information more effectively. Just as he finished carving, he decided to make his way back home. No sooner had he left the tunnel than he saw Takanuva flying one the Ussanui and land nearby.

“What?” the curious Ko-Matoran said. “Toa Takanuva?”

“Delivery from Kopaka,” Takanuva said, giving Kopeke the packaged Toa Stone Kopaka gave him.

Kopeke studied the package before Takanuva took off again. When he made it to his hut, he opened the package and found the stone. He immediately recognized it.

“A Toa Stone?” he asked himself. “Could it be that I am destined to be a Toa like the two Chroniclers before me?”

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 6: Two in One

The Black Spike Mountains. A rocky mountain range neighboring the White Quartz Mountains. Deep within the secret tunnels once used by the Great Beings was Onu-Villa, a subterranean community composed of archivists, prospectors, engineers, miners, and crafters. Among them were Agori and Glatorian of the disbanded Rock Tribe that didn’t side with the Dark Hunters, Agori and Glatorian from the disbanded Iron Tribe that survived the Dreaming Plague, Onu-Matoran, Fe-Matoran, a few Vo-Matoran, and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Earth, Iron, and Lightning. Why did beings of the Lightning element live there? The answer is simple. That community relied on electricity extensively to perform their daily tasks. Beings of the Lightning element had a high resistance to electrical shocks, so, they could safely handle the electrical problems. However, this by no means meant they exclusively handled such problems. Others would assist should the need arise. On this particular day, one Onu-Matoran was busy mining with his supervisor. Their names were Taipu and Onepu, respectively. Taipu was doing most of the work, a common practice for him at that point. He didn’t complain since he was unusually strong even by Onu-Matoran standards, but, he was running low on energy, indicated by his more sluggish movement, which Onepu noticed.

“I think it’s time you had a break to recharge,” Onepu said.

“Thank you, Onepu,” Taipu thanked him.

The two exited the mining tunnel and saw Nuparu tinkering with a Vo-Matoran wearing a Kakama named Vomata. The two met sometime after the reformation of Spherus Magna and the two had been close friends ever since.

“Ah, Nuparu,” Onepu said. “How’s the leg?”

During the Battle of Bara Magna, Nuparu suffered an injury that took the entire lower half of his right leg. He replaced it with a prosthetic made from protosteel, but, felt it was best he retired from combat, which his remaining teammates agreed with. Not because they didn’t appreciate his efforts. Far from it. It’s just that his passion for learning tended to distract him from the task at hand, something that could be costly were it not for his resourcefulness saving his friends many times over.

“I’m still getting used to it,” Nuparu admitted. “But, I’ll manage.”

“Good to hear,” Onepu said. “Likewise at how well you’re settling back into being an engineer.”

“I like making things,” Nuparu said. “I get a lot more opportunities now that I don’t have to worry about being a Toa warrior anymore. I prefer solving problems using my brain anyway.”

“But, you can use your Elemental Powers and Mask Powers,” Taipu said. “No Matoran can do that.”

“True,” Nuparu admitted. “That is a highlight, but, you Matoran can do things I can’t.”

“Like what?” Onepu asked.

“Wake up without worrying about hitting your head on the ceiling for starters,” Nuparu chuckled. “I’ve lost count of how many times that happened to me this month alone.”

“24,” Vomata said. “I’ve kept track.”

Vomata and Nuparu shared a residence in Onu-Villa. Vomata was one of the few Vo-Matoran to be a permanent resident and with her admiration of Nuparu, it made sense.

“You’re an odd Vo-Matoran,” Onepu commented. “Most choose to live in industrial places like Villa Magna.”

“Well, there’s nothing saying I can’t,” Vomata pointed out. “I mean, you look like a Ba-Matoran and you’re here.”

“But, I’m not a Ba-Matoran,” Onepu argued. “I didn’t know they existed until a year ago.” He then had a contemplative look. “I think. Most of my memories before the island of Mata Nui are gone.”

“I doubt you would’ve seen one,” Vomata said. “They didn’t typically go to Metru Nui.”

“Excuse me,” said a voice. All turned to see the owner, Takanuva. “Am I interrupting something?”

“No,” Nuparu said. “We’re fine.”

“In that case,” Takanuva said before handing Taipu and Onepu the two wrapped Toa Stones Onua gave him. “Delivery from Onua.”

“Taking a delivery job today, Takanuva?” Nuparu asked.

“In a matter of speaking,” Takanuva vaguely answered. As he stepped out of the cavernous region to the Ussanui, he took a deep breath. “One more delivery to make. May as well get it over with.” He wasn’t looking forward to the last stop he had to make.

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 7: The Jungle

Bota Magna. Once a jungle moon surrounding the planet Bara Magna and now a jungle region of Spherus Magna. Within its trees was the village of Le-Bo-Villa, which was the home of forest navigators, musicians, farmers, healers, lumberjacks, and carpenters. Among them were Agori and Glatorian of the Jungle Tribe, Le-Matoran, Bo-Matoran, and the remaining Toa and Turaga (or other species capable of using Elemental Powers) of Air and The Green. Takanuva landed the Ussanui outside the jungle and mentally prepared himself for the journey. Each time he’d been in the jungle when he was a Matoran, it was an unpleasant experience. From the various ferocious Rahi that nearly killed him and that one time he saw Taipu get snatched by a Nui-Rama to the unsettling terrain and slimy creatures that clung to his legs as he traversed it, he hated the jungle. But, he forced himself to put up with it to find Tamaru. To his relief, he didn’t need to go very far into the jungle before he found him seated upon a large mushroom.

“Toa Takanuva,” the Le-Matoran said. “For what purpose-reason have you come to visit-see the village?”

“I’ve come to make a delivery on behalf of Lewa,” Takanuva said, handing Tamaru the packaged Toa Stone Lewa gave him. “I’ll see you later.”

Takanuva couldn’t leave the jungle fast enough as Tamaru opened the packaging and found the unusual stone.

“What a mysteryriddle stone,” he commented. He then noticed the map that was the packaging. “Must be some sort-kind of thought-plan for me.”

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BIONICLE: Avokan

Book 1: Rise of the Toa Avokan

Written by Brandon Nell

Inspired by the original BIONICLE story by Alistair Swinnerton, Bob Thompson, Martin Anderson, Christian Faber, and Greg Farshtey

Chapter 8: Stone Cold

In a remote cave, a Toa was transferring his Toa Power into a stone. In the dark of the cave, it was difficult to make out his features aside from a glowing green pair of eyes and a matching brainstalk. His silhouette gave the impression of a rather slender figure.

“I have to be quick,” the Toa said. “He’ll be here soon.”

Before he could take another step, he heard footsteps echo throughout the cave. He turned around and saw the glowing lime eyes of another figure that was smaller than him.

“Making a Toa Stone, are we, Shimotu?” the smaller figure said.

“You!” the Toa said defiantly. “I won’t let you abuse the powers of a Toa!”

“You seem to be under the delusion that you have a choice,” the smaller figure said. “I’ve been equipped to defeat you already.”

The smaller figure threw a capsule at Shimotu. The capsule broke and three slug-like creatures emerged. One drained him of his energy, another made him mute and deaf so he couldn’t hear where they were going or call for help, and the third proceeded to reduce him to dust. Shimotu would have died right away had he not remembered his mask power. He focused his gaze on the entrance of the cave and in a split second, he was near it, Toa Stone in hand. He weakly stood up and stepped into the light, revealing himself to be a Toa of Magnetism wearing a Kanohi Kualsi.

“I can still make it,” he assured himself. But, after a few steps, he succumbed to his drained energy and sustained injuries and collapsed. As the last of his life ebbed away, he kept his grasp on the Toa Stone. At that point, the Red Star took him away, but, left the stone behind.

“How annoying,” the smaller figure said. “He’s escaped for now. No matter. By the time he’s sent back, there’s nothing he can do.” He stepped into the light, revealing himself to be a Po-Matoran infamously known as Ahkmou.

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