Bionicle: Regeneration - Gali Landing

Hey everyone! After quite a while of planning, i’m finally writing my AU - Bionicle: Regen. Here’s the first snippet, the introduction to the familiar world of Regen.

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If you wrote this on google docs, the indentations won’t appear as you want them to on the Message Boards. You can always post a link to the google docs, and set it to view only.
I would suggest to have a space between paragraphs, so it is easier to read, and as for the lines, those need to be on their on line, as to not be part of the previous paragraph.

As for the story, I think it’s pretty cool.

Thanks, I wasn’t sure of posting a link was allowed haha.

posting links to google docs is allowed for this type of thing, so I would not worry about it.

To quote Kini