I think it’d really help your art if you focused more on keeping the proportions right with larger shapes and then add details. In a lot of places it looks like you focused on getting the details, but the character turned out really asymmetrical as a result.
Imma make a non-binding decision to not accept this entry.
Why?
Because you have 13 days to continue to update it.
F’real though, give me one… maybe two iterations on this where you make full use of the time you have remaining to enter. Of course, if you don’t want to, I can’t force you, but practice makes perfect!
(Also, Not-Pro tip but I’ve found grid paper works wonders for keeping proportions stable)