can’t wait for chapter 1!
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This is fantastic! This should be an official Lego novel.
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Wow, thanks! But believe me, things are just getting started, chapter 1: The rebirth. Tomorrow
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uhh sooner than I expected!
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#CHAPTER 1: The Rebirth.
“Agh!” Shouted Eherad as she was thrown to the ground.
The audience cheered her on so she would keep fighting, they chanted her name…
“Cmon Eherad! Get the hell up!” Shouted Plasmu.
The demon serpent of Po-koto, Nuguk, was slithering in the center of the coliseum.
It was one of the deadliest beasts in the region, and only true warriors could possible stand a chance to defeat it.
The serpent rushed quickly towards her. Eherad grabbed her hammer as fast as she could and with all her might, she hit the serpent bringing it to the ground.
The crowd cheered, but the battle was not over yet.
-“Are you ok?” Said Koano to Eherad.
-“No, I’m Eherad, hue”
Koano looked at her with both annoyance and relief at the same time.
Nuguk rose again, even more angry and ferocious than the first time, yet a little confused from the punch.
-“And now! The moment you’ve all been waiting for. The sea of flames!” Said the announcer.
The ground of the arena split into four sections revealing flames taller than the serpent itself. The six warriors gathered in a circle, Eherad, Koano, Plasmu, Shiku, Pumua, and Kaeeno.
-“ok everybody stay united!” Said Pumua.
-“Where should we attack? The flames don’t allow me to see anything! Plasmu!” Said Kaeeno.
-“It’s no good, I don’t have that kind of power! Yet”
-“Go for the head, it will be enough to bring it down if enough strength is used. The flames, there is a pattern, those two sections flame at the same time, the other ones flame randomly, the Serpent moves easily between the random sections.” Said Shiku.
-“Then lets get going! Said Eherad as she ran towards Nuguk”
- "No no wait! (sigh) “everyone stay close all attack the same spot!” Said Koano
-“Got it”
They all went toward Nuguk, Plasmu used a whip to try holding it down. Koano used her pikes to prevent the serpent to move its tail. Kaeeno used his shield to protect Pumua from the flames. Punua shot an arrow towards the demon making countless crystals hit it and bringing it down. As it tired to raise it’s head Shiku and Eherad hit the beast in the head. They had finally defeated it, the demon had been defeated.
The crowd cheered and chanted the warriors names. Then, there was silence as Zaku entered the arena, along with the new protectors. He stared at the warriors as they kneeled. Zaku stopped for a second, as he asked for the “Kotodermis”
-“Warriors, you have proven to be skilled enough to withstand the forces of darkness that forever surround us, and with your skills, may Okoto be prosperoous and peaceful for the rest of time.”
He grabbed his staff, which glowed blue and turned its end into a shar needle. He covered it with the Kotodermis. Then he reached out to all of the warriors saying.
-“you are true warriors, and with your team, may you all find wisdom and become heroes, may you become true Toa.”
He gave every Toa a symbol, this symbol, would give them a sense of Duty, Unity and Destiny. Giving their masks a hidden power, one which they could only achieve by being not warriors, but heroes, finding peace with themselves.
Before they proceeded into the “Nuraki Game” Zaku grabbed Eherad’s shoulder and said to her:
-You indeed are a warrior, but in this island…danger is close to disappearing…we do not need a foerce warrior, we need heroes Eherad, and I turst that you will become one. You are still young to understand, but you must never forget, to do what’s good.
-…I know elder, I will not disappoint you. After all, you are the…wICE one, haha"
-You know what? You aren’t meant to be a toa, a jester would fit you better child, now leave celebrate with your team!
As Eherad went along with the others to the feast, Zaku left in a splitsecond. He went to one of his camps in Po-koto. He usually did that when he wanted to take some time meditating and searching for his inner peace. He glanced at the skies, as night came nigh. Then as the game started he grabbed his staff, and walked down to the feast, yet, he was rather worried than happy for the new toa.
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This was a great read. thank you @BlueCel for taking time to make this. Can’t wait for the story to continue.
They sure did umarekt that Snake thing.
it was umarekt right?
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Amazing
also I guess Koano will obtain her Breathing Apparatus right?
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Idk, I will see what I can do but again, I do not promise anything, I made changes to the characters to fit in the story. Adding some details will be harder than others so, again don’t expect much.
@Cyclopian no! I mentioned several times the name of the game
“Nuraki” and it hasn’t really appeared yet so, I’ll tell everyone when it appears.
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The Gladiator battles of Rome?
Darnit.
She did say that @Cyclopian should of payed attention earlier. so now I’ll just set here and wait the two or what ever amount of time it takes to make this things like a good dog.
Pretty neat so far. I like the idea of Toa being on Okoto before our current Toa, although I personally would have chosen the Metru names. Oh well. Still pretty cool.
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oh man Im late for this…
it was obvious that you were going to put puns in this book (?), it was awesome.
fixed that
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Nice! I like how it starts right in the middle of the action, and how you wrote my character! Didn’t you say that this was a comic, though?
Anyway, what did they do in the colosseum in LoMN to try to prove they were Toa?
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I chose the names cause of the people that sent the mocs to appear on art of the book. And thanks man! But trust me, this is just the begining.
And on a side note I was born on 2000 @Asriel
@Lord_Tuma it was going to, but I figured it was easier to make it fukl text accompanied by a drawing, like a book!
And yes, it is like what I see as “initiation”, In this event the new toa get their “symbol” when they find peace with themselves they will unlock a mask power.
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Sounds pretty cool! Mask powers, huh? That’s something we haven’t seen in G2!
Also, edited title for clarification! 
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Ekimu and Makuta made masks with powers such as speed and strength, and the Toa’s new gold masks provide unity with it’s respective creature.
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True! And we can’t forget the Mask Makers’ powers!
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I was currently working on the painting for the chapter but I guess I would like to make this announcement first.
If your MOC was chosen to appear in the series take in mind I will use the design, NOT THE STORY. I know some of you (if not all) have a story for your character, but I will be making the story I already planned. If you are not comfortable with this please do say so before I continue using the design of your character.
Remember, this is just to avoid disappointment for those who were expeting to have their story implemented into my story.
@Risebell
@Whaddon
@Cyclopian
@Lord_Tuma
@Ghosty
However I will try to keep the characters personality as you imagined it.
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Sounds good.
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I did not have a story beforehand, so it’s all gud! 
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