Self-MOC ~ Valerix The GodsDemon

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 13, 2016, 1:36pm

This is the newest version of my Self-MOC. Valerix was originally created back in 2008 on December 7th. Origionally he was just a mata foot with two green eyes on top of a Phantoka Makuta body.
He comes stocked with fully custom limbs and head. (All my design except for the normal Herofactory build for lower arms.) The Jaw can open and close as well as it has a tongue that can be moved. fully posable fingers and toes, and that is it.

Full Body pictures:

Feet:

Hands:

Waist:

Head:

Chest:

The Evisceration Blade:

So, have any questions? Anything I should work on?
Be sure to let me know!
(P.S. Sorry for bad lighting, one of my lamps died. And the blue pins stick out like and eye sore… I just dont have the black ones :P)

jacques · May 10, 2016, 2:29pm

This is a LOT of info. Might want to tone down on that. Most people don’t want to know the moc’s foot size. Other than that. This is a pretty good thing. Its got a very good, clean aesthetic. I liek it.

Leoxander · May 10, 2016, 2:39pm

It looked great all around until I saw the back of the neck. Is there a way you could fill that in or make it flow with the rest of the MOC?

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 10, 2016, 2:44pm

I have been experimenting, and still XD. And Thankyou.

Mrblackpants · May 10, 2016, 3:53pm

TL;DR
Other than that
He looks really cool!

DG_Eddie · May 10, 2016, 3:58pm

I just want to point out that I’ll give credit if I’m ever getting around to steal that hand design.

MakutaTexxidos · May 10, 2016, 3:58pm

Cool MOC…why would his mother and father be Dragon Aspects from WoW with different spelling tho? and you have too much pointless info to him, which I’m not bothered to read.

MSEP · May 10, 2016, 3:59pm

Well, the MOC looks good. The scale is impressive. However, that is far too much information.

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 10, 2016, 7:06pm

Because I like the game and I just gave them names :P. There is also no point in telling me that you aren’t going to bother reading it. Just don’t read .-.

Too much yes, that is only to get the info out for the first time. Anytime after this should just be normal explaining the MOC. Also Thanks.

Just as long as you give credit anywhere it is posted, otherwise go ahead.

Goose · May 10, 2016, 4:06pm

It looks pretty cool, and your definitely a good moccist, but it took me like 10-20 minutes to read the info that doesn’t affect the moc at all

MakutaTexxidos · May 10, 2016, 4:07pm

I wanted to hint with this on the fact there is too much unnecessary info for this OC.

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 10, 2016, 4:09pm

Well, I just like to put as much detail as I can into my OC’s profiles. Unnecessary or not, I like having the information.

MakutaTexxidos · May 10, 2016, 4:11pm

The question you have to ask yourself is “Will people even read that?” If the answer to that is no…then do not write it.

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 10, 2016, 4:13pm

And myself the question? No. They don’t have to read that, I put it in there because i felt the need too. Weather someone wanted to read it or not. Oh well

MakutaTexxidos · May 10, 2016, 4:15pm

I just feel the length of the text hinder something that might seem as interesting/ok character…anyhow, I’m here because the MOC which is essentially good-looking…the head is too big tho.

CakemanBIO · May 10, 2016, 4:25pm

ValerixTheGodsDemon · May 10, 2016, 4:28pm

Considering it’s upsetting or other things. I removed the profile. I thankyou for the compliment and the opinion.

MakutaTexxidos · May 10, 2016, 4:30pm

by the way…for the profile, go to the Literature section…where it might get appreciated.

Oniwah · May 10, 2016, 5:36pm

The MOC looks awesome, but the distribution of Mata red could be better

darkbrick999 · May 10, 2016, 6:02pm

Fantastic MOC! The snake is a clever toung, and that is a big sword! Although, I do believe that you forgot a space and an apostrophe in the name.