tomorrow never knows
tomorrow never arrives
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So can someone (preferably Ghid) explain what BoL is in the BoD universe?
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ngl the part where Monopoly duels Diero near the end was one of my favorite parts of the book
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That whole thing will become more apparent in book 4 (as is probably obvious by the last chapter). I liked the idea of creating a new, original character in the form of Yuo to represent the reader, and I hope Tomorrow will fulfill the same purpose.
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ā¦eeenteresting
It seems I had a pretty hands off role in all this all things considered
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well I mean you kind of were the hands on a character at one point.
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I donāt like to have the main characters stay the central focus of the dialogue and get more attention than other users two stories in a row. I fear that may change with the fourth book, since cordaxās inclusion is very popular (as well as Dieroās).
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So Iām only on chapter 22, but I have some criticisms. When Iām reading this I get very little sense for the world or even the surrounding area. Iām not asking for paragraphs of exposition shoving info down my throat. But as Iām reading I get very little sense for where the characters are. Iām constantly finding that I visualize them in a black void. I have no understanding of what this world is, what it looks like, or what people do in it.
I also think the story becomes incoherent at times. Stuff just happens and I donāt understand how as reader to visualize it. I also donāt think these chapters do a good job of making clear what the goals or motivations of characters are. Iām not saying that you spell everything for no reason, but the characters seem rather directionless overall. It feels like theyāre just doing whatever comes to mind in the moment which I donāt think is what you were trying to go for. It really doesnāt help that obstacles seem to just appear from the aether with no explanation.
I know you wanted some criticisms, Ghid, so I hope this helps.
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It is a good thing that the next book will take place exclusively in a black void
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Does the next story take place inside of Ghidās heart?
by that I mean ghid the character, not the person
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You should know by now that all of my stories are from the heart
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Does Ghidās heart taste like cow heart?
I hope so
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w-why do you hope this is the case
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As an ex-master, I can tell you that itās not worth it.
@Ghid You clearly have not tried cow heart.
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I never thought there would be a day that Ghid appeared sane
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but it is 
that implies you have
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