@Leoxander I have noticed a problem with your character. Because the powerfist is a melee primary weapon you cannot take it alongside a plasma gun so I am afraid but you will have to change it.
also 
Is this you I found on the vampire coast trailer?
Yes, that is me.
So does that mean I need to choose a secondary ranged weapon?
Y’know what because of how severely you’re handicapping yourself what with the whole taking the most volatile gun a bunch of grenades I’ll allow you to keep your powerfist but you can’t take one of the free pistols sound fair?
That’s fine.
Great
Name: Dwayne ‘The Rock’ Johnson C’mon, we have a Lionel Johnson in canon
Regiment: - Cadian shock troops (+ 10 points)
Gender: Non-Binary
Inventory:
-Flares-10pts (5)
-camo-15pts
-Crossbow-15pts
-Power fist-30pts
-Las pistol-free
Biography:
Dwayne was born in a small village, Dwayne’s family were poor and so Dwayne decided to try and find jobs to help out, Dwayne was also bullied, Dayne tried a new method of getting muscular and become a thicc boi, doctors hate him, find out how to be like him in only ten days! Anyway, Dwayne decided to help peeps and stuff so Dwayne joined the army
Appearance:
-Sub-flak armour-30pts
Where to start with the problems
1.)you can’t just bolt on an extra +10 points because they don’t conform with gender standards
2.) the missile launcher is steel legion exclusive
3.) you can’t have two secondary weapons
4.)you have used 95 out of your 110 points and have completely disregarded armour or war-gear
Oh…
Gulp
I’ll edit the post
thank you for understanding
ahem armour?
Also I would highly recommend that you change the bio as it is far to silly
I kinda like the bio but I edited it
so if I have this correct he came from a small settlement (most-likely on an agri-world) and took some steroids before joining the guard, yeah that works…Accepted
just keep in mind that this won’t exactly have the same comical tone as 2059
Name: 8155, “A1”
Regiment: Death Korp of Krieg
Gender: Irrelevant
Inventory:
-Shovel (Free)
-Respirator (Free)
-Las Pistol (Free)
-Carapace Armour (50 points)
-Hotshot Lasgun - with bayonet (40 points)
-Frag Grenades (10 points)
Biography:
Soldier 8155, also known as A1 by other guardsmen, is a soldier highly devoted to the God Emperor of Mankind (praise be). Possessing an afinity for taking the largest weapon that can be carried and sending a storm of the Emperor’s purification the way of the heretic, xenos and all other foes of the Emperor alike.
To 8155’s dismay, 8155 is rather good at killing, resulting in 8155 remaining alive at the end of all his previous battle engagements despite his apparent disregard for his life. 8155, accepting the nickname A1 (pronounced Ay-wun, the closest thing to an actual name 8155 has been given, this is due to how eight one is pronounced), 8155 remains solitary and not socializing, in the event 8155 outlives those around them again. 8155 has demonstrated the ability to socialise however.
8155 has mastered the techniques of bayonet charging and shovel melee, and has achieved the rank grenadier, 8155 has survived up until this position and this current position by sheer combat prowess, dedication to the Emperor and stupidity.
Appearance:
TBD, will be updated at a later time when I find a good picture.
Backstory may be revised later.
Edit: Explained why 8155 correlates to A1.
Accepted blessed be the throne-world
@Holi
@Jcton
@Omega_Tahu
@Kardax
@Leoxander
@TheOnlyGuyWhoLikesMistika
@Bramsley
@Zero
@Tarkur
We should be starting soon post now
We good to go? Or am I missing the topic?
waiting on @Jcton’s character and I have exams starting on Monday so if you could wait two more weeks that would be great, it pains me to have to delay this
[NAME] Skir Desh
[REGIMENT] Cadian Shock Troops (+ 10 pts)
[GENDER] ████
[INVENTORY]
Mining Laser {65 pts} (fires once per post, range of about 25 yards, does decent damage)
Auto pistol {free}
Carapace Armor {50 pts}
Respirator {5 pts}
[BIOGRAPHY]
Mission Status: Survive {active} //so far going great
lost original weapon, found a substitute in a |Mining Laser|
//now prefers |Mining Laser| over other weapons
Current Status: on Syrma ready for next mission
//cannot betray the one who gave me the mission
Cadian Shock Trooper, Skir Desh, worked on a off-world site. An accident happened and Skir Desh was given an order to survive from a superior soldier, who had been killed in front of the soldier. Skir Desh did as any soldier would do, and followed the simple order. Since then, the soldier has now become cold and nigh emotionless, following all directives to his best ability, completing them without hesitation.
[APPEARANCE]
Accepted Commissar Grant will appreciate the new men to wrangle
