The Wild Masks

This is a story written by me starring several TTV Boards members, who all signed up for being included in this topic.

Chapters will be posted when I have the time.


CHAPTER LIST

Young Nights
Festering Sores
The Kettle Is Set
Fireworks
Nerve
Near The Knuckle
Closer To Home
Scars
Scabs
Open Wounds
Hope Tends To Glimmer
Parallel
The Calm
Symptoms
Diagnosis
Prognosis
Treatment
Recovery
Warm Blooded
Thermoregulated
Blood Bank
Coy Blood
Eyewall
Idiosyncrasy


The Wild Masks

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Chapter One
Young Nights

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โ€œPickles arenโ€™t meant for dumpsters.โ€

The young man turned back, slowly, with a look of the utmost disgust mingled into his sharpened glare. โ€œHow in the world do you think that is a valid excuse for swiping pickles out of a dumpster?โ€

โ€œIโ€™unno.โ€ The other man shrugged, his hand still very much holding the brand-new jar of pickles. โ€œWhat I do know is that, since theyโ€™ve still got the seal, they arenโ€™t contaminated, which means theyโ€™re just as good as all the other preservative-laced pickles wasting away on store shelves.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™re even more of an utter disappointment right now than you usually are.โ€ The younger man scowled, his sharp eyebrows angling down to show his clearly-displayed annoyance. โ€œIf youโ€™re so desperate for pickles as to rummage through garbage-โ€

โ€œIt,โ€ The other man retorted, straightening himself as he did so, โ€œIs about making the world a better place by not wasting perfectly good resources. Isnโ€™t that part of what we do anyways?โ€

โ€œUm, boys?โ€ A chipper voice mumbled from behind the other man. โ€œYouโ€™re, um, kind of clogging the path for the rest of us. Perhaps have your squabbles five feet outside of the alleyway? Thank you.โ€

โ€œOne to talk.โ€ The younger man mumbled in a completely audible whisper, slowly clearing the way for the rest of his team. The other man nodded as he passed with a smile, his height making his six-foot-one superior feel ever bit less so. Shortly after him, although wisdom compelled one not to verbally make such a statement, came the only female member of the team, glaring up at her leader with a toothpick in her mouth. The young man avoided direct eye contact lest it spark a confrontation.

โ€œItโ€™s been a while since weโ€™ve been able to pull off a caper like this!โ€ The chipper voice resumed, floating on past the young manโ€™s unamused eyebrows. โ€œFinally back on the field like we were meant to be. Itโ€™s good to feel the air again, you know?โ€

โ€œYouโ€™re literally not even here right now.โ€ The young man frowned.

โ€œNo, but I got that standing fan repaired, and wow the difference it makes in here!โ€ The machine chipped and whirred, the small cameras embedded around its durable exterior hissing as they adjusted their focus. โ€œIt helps me pretend that a breeze can actually be felt down there, and that Iโ€™m doing something way cooler than just typing on a massive keyboard doing boring security stuff while everybody else gets to go and have fun.โ€

Everyone had turned towards the device as the voice on the other end trailed off in depression. The awkward moment seemed to triple and quadruple in awkwardness as the seconds passed, ending only when the last person in line snatched the tiny machine out of the air and kept on walking.

โ€œSave it for the autobiography, kid.โ€ He muttered, looking up with a sigh at the massive building before him. โ€œDo you think theyโ€™ll get suspicious if we keep showing up wearing matching suits and being this out of the ordinary?โ€

โ€œI hope youโ€™re not questioning our suits, Tone.โ€ The young man glared as he strode past, gesturing with a snap for the rest of his team to follow his lead. โ€œNow you all know the drill: We hit security and we hit them hard. If we can get into the fountain controls we can stop the automatic shutoff, and from there itโ€™ll be eggs.โ€

โ€œNO.โ€ The fellow called Tone backpedaled. โ€œI know whatโ€™s coming. Itโ€™s another one of your atrocious puns. Theyโ€™re the reason we keep having bad luck with these endeavors. I donโ€™t want-โ€

โ€œOver-easy.โ€ The young man fought back a snarky grin and ascended the minimal steps to reach the front door, pausing just inside as security eyed the entire group with a suspicious air. Tone was visibly groaning as he entered, gripping the bridge of his nose all the way.

โ€œRemember, team - this is for him.โ€

โ€œWILD MASKS!!โ€ The young man bellowed, unveiling an angular, grey mask resembling a wolf. The rest of his team revealed additional masks, causing the security guards to fly into a panic and rush at the group. โ€œOn our blood - we avenge this day!!โ€

Before the guards could reach him, a sonic pulse echoed outwards, rattling their teeth and giving the young man plenty of opportunity to don his mask. In an instant his silver hair flared, adrenaline rushed through his veins, and his arm swung out, launching the metal baseball bat hidden in his sleeve directly into his palm.

โ€œNow, Race!โ€ He bellowed, the short girl casually walking forwards with her hands in her pockets. Across the room, more of the security personnel drew their weapons and fired. Race became a blur for a moment, tearing up the glamorous carpet as she went, not having to act for long before Tone let off another sonic pulse, vibrating the internal mechanisms of the guns and forcing them to jam.

โ€œMy turn.โ€ The young man lowered himself down, and bolting forwards darted across the room at high speed, somehow staying low to the ground even as his bat streaked behind him. A roll at the end planted his heel in the face of one guard, before kicking off and knocking a second one flat with his knee.

Swipes were dodged and replied in similar metallic fashion. Within thirty seconds the whole lot was a bruised, unconscious heap of poor, innocent security guards, just trying to make the next paycheck. โ€œIโ€™m getting old.โ€ The young man groaned, feeling his ribs. โ€œCouple of them actually got hits in there. You let him go to the top?โ€

โ€œLet him out as soon as we reached the building.โ€ Tone replied, sliding his hand out of his pocket long enough to gesture upwards with his thumb. โ€œBefore too long you should hear his all-clear over the speake-โ€

โ€œAttention all personnel, please remain in your quarters.โ€ A voice buzzed over the sound system. โ€œThere is an unidentified helicopter craft on the roof of the building, please remain in your rooms and remain calm. Thank you for staying with us.โ€

โ€œCorey, can you confirm? Weโ€™ve got what appears to be a-โ€

โ€œCalm down, boss, I just cooked up a distraction is all.โ€ The cheery voice chimed in, back to being as chipper as previously. โ€œI managed to shut off the fountainโ€™s backup protocol just now, so go ahead and do your thing. All elevators are locked, and so are the emergency exits and restrooms. Only one door has a manual override, and that doorโ€™s on the 87th floor.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™re wonderful, kid.โ€ The young man replied. โ€œIโ€™ll give you the alert when weโ€™re ready to clear out. Big man, you got me?โ€

The tall fellow responded by picking up the edge of the fountain and ripping it out of the ground. Water began to fly everywhere, and another pulse from Tone sent the pumps into overdrive, several inches of water coalescing within minutes.

โ€œMy shoes are getting soaked.โ€ The young man grumbled. โ€œAll right, Rook, letโ€™s do this. It wouldโ€™ve been easy to bring something like a phone to do this with, but I think we need a little more power than thatโ€ฆโ€

The taller man wrapped one arm around the young one and suddenly moved upwards, the added weight not impacting his motion whatever. Abruptly pausing in midair, the young man climbed up onto Rookโ€™s shoulders, reached out to the massive chandelier in the middle of the ceiling, and with a couple well-placed strikes, caused it to creak.

โ€œAlright, Coreyโ€ฆ HIT IT!!โ€ He barked as the last swing impacted with its attachment, sending the chandelier tumbling downwards in a slow spin.

โ€œImpact in three!โ€ He bellowed out, although he was barely heard. Tone quickly ascended the furniture while Race simply stood, watching it fall with the utmost boredom. It hit home, the electrical fixture impacting the water and sending a massive shock into the walls and floor of the building, shorting out just about everything present.

Rook quickly descended with the young man on his shoulder. โ€œAlright, we only have so much ti-โ€

He paused only momentarily, sending a glare at Race upon noticing her glowing stomach. โ€œ-Only so much time until the minimal amount that the alarms have been on draws the attention of someone other than room service. Get it, Rook.โ€

Rook nodded, lowering the young man down to admire his handiwork, the blast doors over the entrance frozen mid-way. He turned around to see Rook rocket towards the massive vault door at the back of the room, carefully place his hands on it, and suddenly disappear. In his place was an elaborate statue of a sphere floating alongside curved, draping rectangles, which flowed like water into the base.

Tone and Race splashed over, Race getting there just ahead of Tone, and wasted no time in dragging the statue out of the way. Making ticking noises with his mouth, the young man set an origami mask down right where the statue had been, and after nine clicks Rook returned to take its place.

โ€œPerfect. Now if everythingโ€™s set, then letโ€™s-โ€

All the glass at the entrance shattered suddenly. โ€œTONE!โ€ He turned with a snarl. โ€œThis is supposed to be somewhat stealthy, you know!โ€

Tone shrugged in response. โ€œYour speeches take too long. Letโ€™s bounce, fellas.โ€

Vaulting through the half-open entrance, with Rook carrying the statue, the group made their way to the same alleyway, disappearing into the darkness. Before the young man exited the scene he deliberately caused, he paused at the entrance to the alleyway and help up his hand, the distant robotic tool slowly returning to the earth.

โ€œGotta hand it to you, Corey, you pulled your part off masterfully. Itโ€™ll be an hour before anyone notices whatโ€™s happened.โ€

โ€œYouโ€ฆโ€ The chipper voice began irradiating awe in all directions. โ€œYou really mean that, Ren? Iโ€™m finally a real- a real Wild Mask?โ€

Ren smiled. โ€œI canโ€™t be the one to make that choice by myself. But in my book, you did good out there, kid. Now letโ€™s do even better.โ€

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Ch 2

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whereโ€™s dolphus :angry:

Iโ€™m really liking this so far, it feels more like you fit the users into a story you wanted to tell and less like you built the story around the users

also your combat descriptions have improved a lot since BoR; I can imagine the scene so much more vividly than before

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I will admit I prefer the previous approach, as itโ€™s harder to make all the users feel like they belong here, but still a fun challenge nonetheless

Letโ€™s hope my fight scenes arenโ€™t the only thing thatโ€™s improved since BoR :smirk:

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also just a teensy weensy little tip, if youโ€™re describing multiple characters interactions without revealing their name, itโ€™s best to make how you refer to them more differentiated that โ€œthe young manโ€ โ€œthe tall manโ€ and โ€œthe other manโ€; otherwise it ends up a bit hard to understand and I found myself backtracking throughout the chapter to remember who was who

itโ€™s also a little confusing how you keep using those descriptions after the characters names are revealed but maybe Iโ€™m just not literate

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Iโ€™m really loving chapter two so far.
Also, yes, I agree with Cordax on the names.

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GET OUT OF MY COMPUTER!!!! :angry: :rage: :fire: :brunei:

Just the first chapter, donโ€™t worry I hated it too :goo:

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Miney likey.

The descriptions you wrote are very convincing, I could see very clearly what you were intending with each one. Chapter 2 has to be my favorite part.

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Very nice first chapter, provided the second isnโ€™t being typed as we speak I think a good place to improve is with the characters, giving some more characteristic descriptions to refer to them by besides what height they are would do wonder.

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Ch 1

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Chapter Two
Festering Sores

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โ€œMy point is, most apartments here are about the size of a wide hallway.โ€ Ren explained as he ascended yet another flight of stairs, trying to act like his legs werenโ€™t killing him. It was important to convey just how athletic and healthy he was, and how much he definitely didnโ€™t rely on his mask to be acrobatic. โ€œSo comparatively, this is actually fairly sizeable, is all Iโ€™m saying.โ€

โ€œThat doesnโ€™t help when you only have two side rooms and one of those is the toilet.โ€ Tone grumbled, taking up the rear of the procession and acting like he was about to die from the exertion. โ€œAt least we have a shower, but thereโ€™s so many people living here that you canโ€™t expect to get hot water for more than ten minutes every three or four hours.โ€

โ€œYou need hot water?โ€ Ren smirked back playfully, knowing full well that he too wasted all the hot water he could manage to waste. Tone only groaned in reply, stopping to rub his calves before racing to catch back up.

โ€œAlright Corey, if you would be so kind.โ€ Ren motioned, the small mechanical device flying out of Toneโ€™s pocket and busying itself in the rather complex lock for the door.

โ€œAll Iโ€™m saying is,โ€ Tone resumed, pausing to pant in agony at the horrific experience of climbing stairs. โ€œIโ€™d like it if we didnโ€™t all have to sleep in the same room when you get your own personal bedroom all to yourself, that so conveniently muffles the sound of Raceโ€™s obnoxious snoring.โ€

โ€œI do NOT snore!โ€ Race snapped, having been cradled in Rookโ€™s arm after giving up climbing a few flights down. โ€œThatโ€™s a rotten lie and you canโ€™t prove it!โ€

โ€œYou canโ€™t disprove it; youโ€™re asleep when it happens, short stuff.โ€ Tone tried to voice a grin but lurched forward once more as his muscles ached. Race crossed her arms and continued mumbling under her breath at the horrid accusation.

โ€œI hate it when mom and dad fight.โ€ Rook lamented, earning him a rough elbow from Race in the ribs, which did not move him at all. โ€œIs Corey okay? Heโ€™s awfully quiet in there.โ€

โ€œItโ€™s soundproofed, remember?โ€ Ren lazily rolled his head towards Rook with raised eyebrows.

As if on queue, the door suddenly sank an inch, and then rolled back into the wall with all the slow and methodical energy of a tank. Inside, sitting cross-legged on a rolling chair, was more hoodie than human, the tips of his fingers poking out from the excessive sleeves. Nestled atop the mountain of violet cloth was a ruddy face held aloft by an incredibly thin neck, a mop of almost golden hair hiding the dark brows underneath. He positively beamed at the appearance of his superior, and thrust his almost carpeted arms skywards in overdone salutation.

โ€œWelcome back! I canโ€™t believe that worked as well as it did.โ€ Coreyโ€™s hands flopped back down to the front of the chair as he kept beaming, with only injured smiles and cold nods given in return. โ€œI anticipated your timely arrival, and have prepared the appropriate measures for resuscitation.โ€

Almost smugly, he tapped a key on his keyboard, causing part of the perfectly white paneling which lined every surface in the room to flip down, revealing three plastic spheres with heavy condensation on the inside to the degree that it was impossible to tell what was hidden beneath the capsuleโ€™s inedible surface.

โ€œGreat. Gotta catch 'em allโ€ฆโ€ Tone mumbled, swiping one and cracking it open to receive a faceful of steam and a good look at some of the cheapest quality ramen noodles he had ever seen before. And he hadnโ€™t seen many, because- well, never mind.

โ€œAnd by 'em, I mean cancers apparently. Which one is this now? Ramen Royal? Or did you grow this from your scalp, like last weekโ€™s?โ€ Tone glared, picking up a noodle with his fingers and sliding it directly into his mouthโ€ฆ from the top of his mask, inevitably letting it worm its way down into his open maw.

โ€œI d- No. Look, if you hate it so much we could try soup again.โ€

โ€œAbsolutely not.โ€ Tone sighed out a growl. โ€œThatโ€™s the last time Iโ€™m having cream of broccoli and cheese and blood and pain. Not fun.โ€

โ€œWe could do a cold soup,โ€ Offered Rook, settling himself down on the floor, back against the wall, his massive shoulders and ridiculous height offering little else. โ€œMaybe that wouldnโ€™t hurt as bad.โ€

โ€œSometimes half the things you say I canโ€™t tell if theyโ€™re trying to be even meaner than me, or if youโ€™re just that unaware.โ€ Tone replied, sticking an additional five noodles down the inside of his mask at once. โ€œRemind me never to invite you to any social gatherings.โ€

Seeing as Rook appeared genuinely hurt by this, Ren rolled his eyes and unslouched his posture, where he had been devouring the ramen at a ferocious pace with a plastic spoon. โ€œHey, I need you three to check on that party coming up in a week or two, see if that would be a good place to spring the next raid. Itโ€™d gonna be a rough one no matter what, but I need to make sure itโ€™s worth it.โ€

Rook gale a cheery salute, implying that everything was smoothed over by the change in topic, at least for now. Tone gave a silent snort in reply before turning towards Corey. โ€œSay kid, whereโ€™s your ramen? Thought youโ€™d want to share in the poison same as the rest of us.โ€

โ€œI was starving while you were out, and made mine in advance.โ€ Corey looked crestfallen at the confession. โ€œI needed brain food for all this work Iโ€™ve been doing.โ€

โ€œHey, look, if Iโ€™m not here, you donโ€™t have to just eat this gunk.โ€ Tone dug his gloved fingers around in the plastic bowl. โ€œYou should convince olโ€™ bossman to spend some of his rich living money to get you some snacks to survive off of.โ€

โ€œMaybeโ€ฆโ€ Corey looked even more crestfallen, but still managed to turn in pleading fashion towards Ren, hoping his miserable plight of being hungry sometimes would inspire him to invest in a personal snack stash.

Ren rolled his eyes yet again and waved the pair off, heading towards one of the interior doors.

โ€œSo thereโ€™s a chance.โ€ Corey whispered, his eyes glowing with delight.

โ€œYes, but donโ€™t you worry. Iโ€™ll convince him itโ€™s for the best.โ€ Tone chuckled deviously, lightly punching Coreyโ€™s shoulder in affirmation.

โ€œSir! The kid and Tone are conspiring again!โ€

โ€œSNITCH!!โ€ Tone snarled at Rook with a grin, who recoiled in horror. Corey chortled at the artificial drama, but Ren had already left the room, standing in the restroom door for a moment before slowly closing it behind him. Race was silently standing, facing the wall, one foot on the shower tile, holding something in her hands.

โ€œHey.โ€ Ren murmured, kicking slightly at a crooked tile in the floor. Race only murmured in response. โ€œI know this isnโ€™t the best time, but we need to talk.โ€

Race turned, her face flat, her hands holding a series of metal pipes, which curved and twisted all over the place, proceeding from and entering back under her shirt. โ€œYeah?โ€

โ€œThat-โ€ Ren cleared his throat slightly. โ€œThat was stupid of you today. You knew the risks you were taking.โ€

โ€œI appreciate your concern.โ€ Race blandly replied, sniffing for a moment. โ€œBut I know what Iโ€™m doing and I donโ€™t really need your โ€˜big brotherโ€™ protectiveness. And donโ€™t bring him back up, either - everybody lost something that day. But you donโ€™t offer the same kind of consolation to Tone, or the kid, or anybody else. So save the sympathies for someone who asks for it, okay?โ€

โ€œItโ€™s not about sympathy.โ€ Ren sighed, straightening from the leaning position he had taken against the wall. โ€œGoing that fast nearly killed you before, Race. I canโ€™t have you putting yourself in situations so blatantly dangerous again. Iโ€™m not willing to lose you the way-โ€

โ€œMm.โ€ Ren pressed his curled fist against his mouth until his teeth hurt from the pressure. โ€œIโ€™ll stop. Before I do anything else stupid. But please be careful, Race.โ€

โ€œRen?โ€ Race replied, cutting him off just as he turned to leave. As he looked back, she folded up the metal piping, which effortlessly twisted about in her hands, and compacted it back into the metallic hollow in her stomach.

โ€œYou do good.โ€

Ren didnโ€™t smile in reply. He tried to, but nothing got out.

โ€œNO, you idiot! Thatโ€™s direcwuy into the guardโ€™s wuestoom!โ€ Tone sounded as Ren and Race returned to the main room, just in time for the inspiring visual of Tone holding a straw down his mask with a funnel in one hand and a beverage can in the other, trying to pour it down in non-chaotic fashion.

โ€œTone, be nice,โ€ Ren scolded with mock weariness, marching across the room and leaning over the back of Coreyโ€™s chair. โ€œWhat do we got, boys?โ€

โ€œFront access,โ€ Corey demonstrated with the cursor as he spoke. โ€œThen spike the drinks, Tone releases a noise from outside which sets off the fire alarm, if enough of the drinks are spiked weโ€™ll have absolute pandemonium inside. Rook then suggested we try taking the service elevator after that point, but yeah, thatโ€™s the guard station there, and theyโ€™d surely have someone behind for security. Can we guarantee taking him out before alarms are raised?โ€

โ€œI thought it was a good ideaโ€ฆโ€ Rook murmured, to which Tone laughed and guzzled more of his foul beverage.

โ€œFellas, youโ€™re looking at it all wrong.โ€ Ren smirked. โ€œItโ€™s an excellent plan-โ€

โ€œFhank you.โ€ Tone replied with as smug a tone as possible.

โ€œโ€ฆAnyway, I think trying to get in at the base and find our way all seventeen stories up without detection is going to be a little difficult. Assuming I can confirm the level of tech access these things have, Corey, do you think you can fly a helicopter?โ€

โ€œWhaaa?!โ€ Coreyโ€™s eyes lit up with wonder and his mouth climbed into a massive smile, but fell back into disappointment and sadness a second later. โ€œOh. From in here.โ€

Tone began having a stifled laughing fit, causing him to choke on some of his drink, which prompted Race to slap him repeatedly on the back unhelpfully as he tried to ask her to stop. โ€œIf we can get in through the roof, and maybe had Tone enter through the front, perhaps weโ€™d be able to secure our exit much easier that way. Security cameras on all sides donโ€™t cover close to the buildingโ€™s exterior until about halfway down, so we wouldnโ€™t need to take them out of commission until weโ€™re on our way out.โ€

โ€œExcellent plan,โ€ Commented Tone, in between coughing what sounded like five or six lungs out. โ€œRace if you donโ€™t stop Iโ€™m gonna have to sue you for malpractice.โ€

โ€œAnd with that, I have to head to bed.โ€ Ren slowly raised himself off of the back of Coreyโ€™s chair. โ€œDonโ€™t stay up too long now; we all have our places to be tomorrow and a long rest is necessary for all of us to recover.โ€

โ€œRight.โ€ Tone spat, finally extracting the straw from his face. โ€œYou all, anyhow.โ€

โ€œI wish I could sleep.โ€ Rook replied, even as Ren carefully lifted the silvery, spiked mask from off its faceless host, which slumped immediately afterwards. โ€œInstead I just get to talk to the wall all night.โ€

โ€œIโ€™ll work on something to keep you busy at nights.โ€ Ren gently smiled, gingerly placing the mask down on an ornate pillow. โ€œThe rest of you, have a good sleep. Lots of big events coming up soon; gotta stay at the top of our game.โ€

โ€œMm.โ€ Race murmured, deftly unrolling her sleeping bag and clambering inside. โ€œRook, if you catch anyone snoring, itโ€™s undoubtedly Tone. Got it?โ€

Rook awkwardly looked between her and the snickering Tone, who flattened the beverage can in between his palms like a marshmallow and missed a throw towards the trash can. โ€œUh, yeah. Sure. Whatever, I guess.โ€

โ€œWorks.โ€ She mumbled, collapsing downwards and staring endlessly into the opposite wall.

Ren shook his head with a smile and exited into his narrow bedroom, more akin to the mental image he had of the local apartments. Standing still until the light from outside his door disappeared, and the chatter died into muffled whispers, he calmly turned off his light and lowered his bunk from the wall.

There, inset into the wall, was another ornate pillow, one with a different mask atop it. It was very tall, two narrow, darkened slits at the top serving as the eyes, leaving practically no room for scalp. The rest of the way down was massive, ivory teeth, which curved out just before both jaws met, somehow carved into a smile. It was devious and monstrous, and yet exhibited a commanding air, as if it would be improper to speak before this mask got the chance.

For a moment Ren was silent. Then, kneeling on his cot, he closed his eyes, keeping his back as straight as he could. A terrible coldness entered the room, which he fought back the urge to shiver at. It had not been so easy before.

โ€œ๐ป๐‘’๐“Ž, ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“‚๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“๐’พ๐’ธ๐‘’.โ€

Ren sighed, opening his eyes to the unfortunate sight he knew was waiting for him. A black trail spilled down to the floor, at once like both roots and leaves, elevating this wicked mask off the ground, as it looked about the room in an almost lost fashion.

โ€œ๐’œ๐’ฝ, ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰โ€™๐“ˆ ๐“Œ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐“‡๐‘’ ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š ๐“…๐“Š๐“‰ ๐’พ๐“‰.โ€ The apparition drifted overtop him, the ethereal substance splitting to cling to the walls of the tiny room, using its teeth to grasp an ornate Japanese pipe in its massive teeth. The slim face turned back towards Renner with an even more devious nature than before, the jaw somehow moving despite being made of inanimate materials. โ€œ๐ฟ๐‘’๐“‰โ€™๐“ˆ ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐’ถ๐“‡ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐“Œ๐‘’๐‘’๐“‰, ๐’ฟ๐“Š๐’พ๐’ธ๐“Ž ๐’น๐‘’๐“‰๐’ถ๐’พ๐“๐“ˆ.โ€

โ€œI told you what to expect.โ€ Ren coldly replied, turning just enough to eye the creature with a healthy dose of disgust. โ€œThe statue is in the storage unit, sixth one Iโ€™ve had to open to avoid suspicion. Rook doesnโ€™t like having to move everything around like that all the time.โ€

โ€œ๐’ซ๐‘œ๐‘œ๐’ฝ ๐“…๐‘œ๐‘œ๐’ฝ.โ€ The mask sarcastically spat. โ€œ๐ป๐‘œ๐“Œ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐’ฝ๐‘’๐’ถ๐“‡๐“‰ ๐’ท๐“๐‘’๐‘’๐’น๐“ˆ ๐’ป๐‘œ๐“‡ ๐“…๐‘œ๐‘œ๐“‡ ๐’ฆ๐’ถ๐’ฝ๐“ƒ, ๐“‰๐“‡๐“Ž๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐’ท๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐’พ๐“‚๐’พ๐“‰๐’ถ๐“‰๐‘’ ๐“‚๐‘’. ๐‘€๐“Ž ๐’ถ๐“…๐‘œ๐“๐‘œ๐‘”๐’พ๐‘’๐“ˆ ๐’พ๐’ป ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“ˆ๐“Ž๐“‚๐“…๐’ถ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐‘’๐“ˆ ๐’ถ๐“‡๐‘’ ๐“ƒ๐‘œ๐“‰ ๐’ถ๐“ˆ ๐’น๐‘’๐“๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“‰๐‘’ ๐‘œ๐“‡ ๐‘”๐‘’๐“ƒ๐“Š๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘’ ๐’ถ๐“ˆ ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“Š๐“๐’น ๐’น๐‘’๐“‚๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น, ๐’ท๐‘œ๐“Ž.โ€ Its ivory incisors clicked against the mouthpiece of the pipe. โ€œ๐ผ ๐“Œ๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“‰ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐‘’๐“Ž๐‘’๐“ˆ, ๐‘…๐‘’๐“ƒ. ๐ผ ๐“‚๐“Š๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‹๐‘’ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐‘’๐“Ž๐‘’๐“ˆ. ๐ธ๐“‹๐‘’๐“‡๐“Ž๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐“ˆ๐‘’๐’ธ๐‘œ๐“ƒ๐’น๐’ถ๐“‡๐“Ž ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‰, ๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“…๐‘’๐’ธ๐’พ๐’ถ๐“๐“๐“Ž ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐’น๐‘’๐“๐’พ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“‰๐‘’ ๐‘’๐‘”๐‘œ๐“ˆ ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š๐“‡ ๐’ถ๐“ˆ๐“ˆ๐‘œ๐’ธ๐’พ๐’ถ๐“‰๐‘’๐“ˆ.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™ll respect them - All of them, creature.โ€ Ren replied with a sudden dangerous tone as he turned his head back towards the ornate pillow. โ€œOr youโ€™ll never get your eyes back at all.โ€

โ€œ๐’œ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐’ท๐“Ž ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐’ถ๐“‚๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐“‰๐“‡๐‘œ๐“€๐‘’, ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š ๐“Œ๐’พ๐“๐“ ๐“ƒ๐‘’๐“‹๐‘’๐“‡ ๐‘”๐‘’๐“‰ ๐’ด๐’ช๐’ฐ๐‘… ๐‘’๐“ƒ๐’น ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐’ท๐’ถ๐“‡๐‘”๐’ถ๐’พ๐“ƒ.โ€ The spirit flicked a theoretical tongue inches from Rennerโ€™s face, its voice producing a cruel hissing sound as it spoke. โ€œ๐ต๐“Š๐“‰ ๐ผ ๐“Œ๐’พ๐“๐“ ๐’ท๐‘’ ๐‘”๐“‡๐’ถ๐’ธ๐’พ๐‘œ๐“Š๐“ˆ ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐’ฝ๐‘œ๐“ˆ๐“‰ ๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น ๐“‡๐‘’๐“ˆ๐“…๐‘’๐’ธ๐“‰ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“‡๐’ถ๐’ท๐’ท๐“๐‘’ ๐’ฝ๐‘’ ๐“€๐‘’๐‘’๐“…๐“ˆ ๐’ถ๐“‡๐‘œ๐“Š๐“ƒ๐’น ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“‚. ๐ผ ๐’ถ๐“‚ ๐’ถ ๐“‚๐’ถ๐“ƒ ๐‘œ๐’ป ๐“‚๐“Ž ๐“Œ๐‘œ๐“‡๐’น, ๐’พ๐’ป ๐“๐’พ๐“‰๐“‰๐“๐‘’ ๐‘’๐“๐“ˆ๐‘’.โ€

โ€œYouโ€™ll be able to bring him back when youโ€™re at full power, just like you promised?โ€ Ren tried to keep up his own personal mask of indifference, but he could feel his own enthusiasm causing it to slip.

โ€œ๐’ช๐’ฝ, ๐’ธ๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“๐’น.โ€ The mask settled back in its alcove, nibbling on the end of the illustrious pipe with whimsy seeping out of its blackened sockets. โ€œ๐ป๐‘’โ€™๐“๐“ ๐’ท๐‘’ ๐“ˆ๐‘œ ๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“…๐“…๐“Ž ๐“‰๐‘œ ๐“ˆ๐‘’๐‘’ ๐“Ž๐‘œ๐“Š.โ€

โ€“

Ch 3

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Finally, the backstory for these losers is out of the way, and we can begin the shenaniganizing :smirk:

Too late :goo:

Wonder has now been do :sunglasses:

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Let the smoky smoker smoke his vapor deviceโ€ฆ wonder what this guy is anyhow.

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wrong hear :angry:

crazy that I read this sitting cross-legged on my rolling chair

also what is rook

and why does race have some sort of fnaf contraption in her stomach

nota we need your help none of us are literate

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youโ€™re definitely seeing things, um, I definitely didnโ€™t edit itโ€ฆ read it again.

:smirk:

Was that the tripe of '87?! :bear: :tophat: :pizza:

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I thought it was Rukah but that works too

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Me and the boys waiting for Nota to get to theorizing
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Now fellas, is that any way to approach this? By making Nota do all the work while you sit back and relax?

Thereโ€™s no reason why you canโ€™t just as easily theorize about the contents and end up equally as wrong as he is, so get theorizing ya goobers :triumph:

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ok fine

who's the hf fan now

my current theory is that ghid mask wants this statue to gain a physical form that isnโ€™t a smoke cloud; it could be its old body or maybe just a new one

I honestly donโ€™t know whatโ€™s going on with race (I will try to come up with an explanation later), but I think Rook may be some sort of puppet who gains life or at least mobility when his mask is applied

speaking of the masks, Iโ€™m wondering how they were made/what they really do. they seem to give members of the team increased mobility and other powers. we know that Rook needs his to move, Tone can make those sonic pulses with his (or maybe he can do that anyway?), Raceโ€™s allows her to go fast (or at least thatโ€™s what I can gather from this)

knowing that the ghid mask houses some sort of spirit, the other probably do to which is what gives the team their abilities but I wonder whose spirits are in them

there is a chance that ghid mask and the other masks are completely separate entities too

okokok so this implies that rook has ribs which only makes sense if he is organic and likely human but then why would he have no face and also not be able to move without the mask hmmmmmm

ok so the masks do let all of the members go fast, but also let Tone do his sonic boom thing. if the dead team member died by going too fast, I think that means that they all have the ability.

also, does the team know why theyโ€™re going on the missions? ren seems to be in charge of the group but heโ€™s getting orders from funny ghid mask, which means that the group is left in the dark on why theyโ€™re doing what theyโ€™re doing. are they getting paid? how did they meet?

even though thereโ€™s a lot I donโ€™t understand I really like this so far. keep up the good work ghid :+1:

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Now weโ€™re talking :sunglasses:

Yeah I'm a hero (nota) factory (hffan) fan

Same

Unfortunately the next chapter wonโ€™t provide many extra details in regards to the sources of their masks and powersโ€ฆ

โ€ฆbut the next next might :goo:

the TTV users who double posted over the years :pensive:

Now thereโ€™s the brainrot we like to see :smirk: falling to pieces over trying to figure out why Ghid wrote something is what weโ€™ve been waiting for thatโ€™s what itโ€™s all about woooo

and itโ€™s also what Iโ€™ll be doing in two months when I regret everything :disappointed:

now thatโ€™s interesting. I wonder where I said that? :thinking:

you better be real happy Iโ€™m confining laptop smash gif to the Bo_ series :dizzy_face:

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get writing

hero factory hotline please state the nature of your crisis

hahaha yeah so funny hahaha I am never going to recover from this

ok so my logic is that race went fast here

and then later on ren was mad at her for this because its apparently dangerous (maybe the glowing stomach is some kind of warning mechanism for when people go too fast? either that or its related to her industrial intestines) and then says this after race mentions โ€œhimโ€ (the previous member who died and ren is trying to bring back)

one would assume that he would go on to say โ€œIโ€™m not willing to lose you the way that he diedโ€ or something along those lines

therefore, going fast killed renโ€™s friend :goo:

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I donโ€™t have time to read this now but seems good :+1:

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