I figured that was what you were going for.
Alright. Just wanted to be safe.
Also
This is some Undertale level of flavor text, and itās amazing.
Though I might be thinking that largely because Iāve been playing Undertale a lot recently, but hey who really knows?
Alright, now that you guys have the Green Key, thereās gonna be a quick fight with some predacons, followed by some time to give yāallās characters some loot, then thatāll be about it for this planet.
For clarification, Llun wants to use the generator of the Nemesis to blow it up and more less self-destruct
I figured that was Llunās plan, and Iāll warn you that he doesnāt have much of a chance of pulling that off.
tbh my biggest worry would be escaping it before it blows up. The radar should be useful enough to make him wary of the enemies around him.
Uh, no. You have to react to the attack as it happens, not try and retcon it.
Hope I didnāt miss anything, was quite busy with my schedule. Since I have quarantine and I have a homework plan, I gotta keep that in check plus I had other stuff down the line. Apology for inactivty.
Alright. Sorry. Iāll fix it.
[spoiler]Me: drops character into RP
also Me: doesnāt know where anything is, helps a big bot
also also Me: sees big ship dropping loads of Asrar 2 the Electric Boogaloo
also also also ME: wants to blow up big ship
also also also ALSO ME: too suicidal to blow up big ship
Me: sadness because wanted fireworks[/spoiler]
Me RN XD
At least the Predakingās depth perceptionās a bit wonky now
A hand for an eye as they always say.
Here is a main gripe I have. Itās an opinion, so take it as such.
From places Iāve been and whatnot, when people collabed together. They usually waited for everyone to respond but I see that some people here donāt have the same courtesy. Meaning, Meepinater was collabing with me, to essentially get the third omega key. Now, I do understand that this Roleplay has been going on for almost a year. But, thatās what usually big Roleplays like this take. It wouldnāt end in a few months, not if you want a good story and narrative.
If you take this narratively, what happened there with the Trials. It looks awkward and unreadable. Because, if you think about it from a story perspective. Why wasnāt Scorchlock helping out? Why didnāt he do something? Why did he wait so long?
Because, at the end of the day, Roleplaying is nothing more than writing a story with the characters you make. I think this is pretty much obvious, now personally I find it disrespectful if somebody doesnāt wait for me, to reply in an important scene. Due to the fact, that I was busy and I couldnāt muster motivation or time to do so. Essentially, if I had to wait till a few others replied to collab I was in, then so be it, however, I know that narratively and story-wise it looks decent, smooth, and not awkward if you get what I mean.
You always do ask for constructive criticism and feedback Chrome here is mine. Now I do realize if weād do this, the RP would be even slower, because of different time zones and people having busy schedules. But if we donāt do that, then why bother Roleplaying at all? Do you understand what I mean? Of course, we shouldnāt do this every time we collab, but key moments like this. Getting the omega-key, I would have appreciated if yāall waited. Because I give and expect the same courtesy with me.
Again, this is an opinion, take it as such.
I understand where youāre coming from, but at the same time, I personally didnāt think it would be fair to keep the rest of the players waiting when we were so close to getting the Green Key and moving on with the game. I do try to make sure everybodyās available before something important happens, but there are times when it just doesnāt pan out. Iāve been where you are right now, and itās a bummer, but in the end youāve just got to live with it and wait for the next time.
Thereās still two more Omega Keys, and whatever the fifth piece of the Lock is (I know, of course, but Iām not telling), along with a few more surprises and events in store. Youāll be there to have Scorchlock participate in many of those, Iām sure.
Yeah, I can tell that Iām essentially the only one with that kind of mentality. I personally do not find it unfair. I find that that one person should also enjoy the event, and not miss it just because he was in the minority. I suppose, I was fine with that way back then, but as I grow older and I find that storytelling is a crucial point to the RPs, I find it to be lackluster and awkward to see when someone is left behind because life was so unfortunate to them. I canāt change my feelings of being disrespected, again itās an opinion.
And you never really know with the future. I hope Iāll be a little bit more motivated and have time to sit down and enjoy the RP as a whole. But, my advice, you should also keep an eye on the Roleplay as a story, since you understand what I mean. Not always, but from time to time. Iāve expressed my views and I accept that Iām initially the only one person who thinks so. But freedom of speech is very important to me, and when I find like I want to address something, I will.
Iām aware that you simply had to do it, due to of how close you were and all of that. But personally, I wish that everyone could enjoy the story and RP and the beautiful thing that has come out of your Roleplay. Sure, it may not be perfect, but as a story it holds up, of course, it can always be better. But you know my opinion, Iād rather wait and have everyone be there. Anyway, Iām glad you took my opinion well and so far, Iāll keep an eye out and if I have any feedback to give, I will.
Thank you for understanding and for speaking your mind.
Is it alright if I add Laslowās replacement character now?
Sure!
Name: Darkside
Homeworld: Cybertron, but spent many of his years on Velocitron as a spy.
Faction: Decepticon
Appearance: In botmode, take RD-L1,
(skip to 20:30 and watch to 20:34)
and alter him so he fitās a bit better in the Transformers aesthetic.
Alt-mode:
RD-09 car.
in Green and black like the below
W/A/E: basic blaster rifle. In addition, he has what he calls, the āchargerā system. He has several chips, (10 in total) that he can switch out to give his alt-mode different ablities. He only has space to carry 5 at a time, and can only activate 1 at a time. The are,
- Undistort: Erases any illusion or mirage seen.
- Sand Speed: Fuses sand and other unstable surfaces together for a short period of time. Which lets him drive over it safely.
- Folding Corners: Allows him to snap through 90 degree turns.
- Fog Vision: Allows him to see clearly in foggy conditions.
- Slip Grip: Gives the him the ability to drive over slippery terrain with the needed friction.
- Night Sight: Allows the him to see in total darkness.
- Impervious Tires: Creates regenerating, or auto-repair, tires that always remain in perfect condition.
- Lightning Rod: Protects him from electrical charges.
- Hyper Jump: Allows him to make extremely long and high jumps with ease.
- Sound Modulator: Allows him to amplify sound so you can better hear his surroundings
Please note, they only work in alt-mode, not in bot mode.
Bio: The silent type, Darkside spent many of his years working as a spy for the decepticons on Velocitron. He spent a lot of time in alt-mode, as his Sound Modulator and Night Sight āChargersā made him the perfect spy for place like velocitron, where bots spending lots of time in alt-mode was nothing unusual. He wasnāt particularly happy with the end of the war, and dislikes autobots on principle. However, he wasnāt nearly as idealistic, brave, nor stupid enough to join Bludgeon and co. He has a very sharp, caustic personality, resulting in him having few friends. Not that he cares much.
(now I just need to find him some nice Autobot girl to sweep him off his feet.)
Theme: https://youtu.be/_uXkBY9YOfc